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At The Bar
By TornPaperDoll
She’s broken again
Crying for a kiss
To help heal the wounds
She left on her wrist
She just wants your sympathy
As she comes crying once more
But the booze got the best of her
Leaving her on the floor
And her mascara runs
And drips from her chin
And the more liquid that leaves her body
The more that she puts in
She can’t remember why she’s crying
And maybe it’s better that way
And if she drowns it out
Maybe it’ll all go away…
She’s broken again
Came here to heal her pain,
And it’s kind of a coincidence that that’s
The same reason that I came.
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Copyright 2004 TornPaperDoll
Published on Monday, February 16, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "At The Bar"
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On Monday, September 6, 2004, Northstar
(375)
wrote:
*deep breath* ah this is a truly amazing piece--glad I found it--what you express here is so familiar to me and I love the way you wrap it up with the ending which shows that you are seeing yourself reflected in the subject of your poem--awesome
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On Sunday, May 30, 2004, murder_in_clubland
(388) wrote:
wow you are really good i like this alot~ss
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On Sunday, February 22, 2004, Emptyness Inside Me
(171) wrote:
Wow, this one is great, you are extremely talented, dont let anyone ever tell you otherwise, if they do, let me know and I'll smack them into reality, great job ~Emptyness~
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On Monday, February 16, 2004, Kinkypoptart
(555) wrote:
great, just fucking great! lol. Nothing better than going to the bar to drown away your sorrows. "Came here to heal her pain... its a coincidence that that's... the same reason I came" That owns. tata darling. ~*~tart~*~
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A former member wrote:
i absolutely love this one. it connects and flows and wow it was great. very nice write =)~lys
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On Monday, February 16, 2004, physicalgraffiti
(56) wrote:
"She can’t remember why she’s crying And maybe it’s better that way" i've been there. thank you for finding the words. awesome write. i love all of your pieces.
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