Comments by All Members
- "I had someone who saw...but chose to ignore. Most people don't know how to answer the cry. This is an emotional write.
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Posted by MorganaRose on "My Cry" by TornPaperDoll
- "This is amazing. I love the layers of this person that you've created.... One of my favorites I've read here. "
Posted by MorganaRose on "Show Me" by TornPaperDoll
- "Saying goodbye to someone you love is always hard...but you put it beautifully into words. My favorite "I dusted out the pages
Of the dried petals that remained
I kept them so that I could
Still have flowers when it rained" This stanza reminds me how certain things can always bring lost feelings back to life. This is a excellent work."
Posted by MorganaRose on "Scrapbook of You" by TornPaperDoll
- "Such raw pain and emotions spread out into the screen; we can practically feel ourselves in your shoes throgh the flow of your words"
Posted by Unknown on "Please Explain" by TornPaperDoll
- "People see but do not offer,
No, they allow us to suffer.
What a wake up call. This is an work of art :)"
Posted by Unknown on "My Cry" by TornPaperDoll
- "u brought tears to my eyes, this rings so true that it's painful to read. well done"
Posted by natalie on "Missed" by TornPaperDoll
- "I used to read you all the time, I don't know how I missed this. I know this too well maybe.....hmmmm, nicely put here. thanks Sheri"
Posted by Vampira on "He Wants Her" by TornPaperDoll
- "i have to say, after all this time amanda, i still read all your works evry so often and i always end up back at this one more than once each time, its just beautifully written and one of my favorites, please write more soon its been awhile josh"
Posted by Emptyness Inside Me on "Break of Light" by TornPaperDoll
- ""your" x 2 'sacrifice' Love the tight rhyme that closes it out... very quaint, very relevant... sweet, even. kudos."
Posted by Unknown on "Break of Light" by TornPaperDoll
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