Break of Light

By TornPaperDoll

I feel you, You're warm touch
Reminds me how real all this is.
I'd sacrafice almost anything
Just for a glimpse of this.
I'm lying here, holding my breath
Hoping time will cease to continue on
And we could lie here with each other,
Forgetting if it's right or wrong,
And i'm closing my eyes to remember
Every single breath and moan
And those sweet tempting words,
I Love You, in you're weighty, cocky tone
And i'm begging for just one more minute,
I'm grasping onto each, so tight,
But this late night rendezvous ends here,
With the wounding break of light.

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© 2007 TornPaperDoll
Published on Saturday, January 27, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Anybody_Killette On Friday, September 27, 2013, Anybody_Killette (47)By person wrote:

    I miss you.

  • Emptyness Inside Me On Wednesday, February 10, 2010, Emptyness Inside Me (171)By person wrote:

    tsk tsk tsk amanda, lol, u need to post some more works :)

  • Emptyness Inside Me On Tuesday, June 30, 2009, Emptyness Inside Me (171)By person wrote:

    i have to say, after all this time amanda, i still read all your works evry so often and i always end up back at this one more than once each time, its just beautifully written and one of my favorites, please write more soon its been awhile josh

  • A former member wrote: "your" x 2 'sacrifice' Love the tight rhyme that closes it out... very quaint, very relevant... sweet, even. kudos.

  • A former member wrote: Even though we could never seem to work things out I still love you just the same, I do I miss your smile and that sparkle in your eyes You're so beautiful, never change! illiawer at gmail dot com I hope I'll hear from you, It's been a long time.

  • Emptyness Inside Me On Wednesday, February 28, 2007, Emptyness Inside Me (171)By person wrote:

    wow, so loving yet so painful, you always paint pictures in my mind with your words, great job as always amanda, ~josh~

  • Mistress Shadow On Monday, January 29, 2007, Mistress Shadow (249)By person wrote:

    This stung a fleshy spot for me. Sometimes I hesitate indulging such rendezvous for cringing in the thought of having to let go of those moments you cling to so tightly. Thanks for sharing, ~T

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