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My Cry
By TornPaperDoll
Didn’t you see those marks lying on my arm
That show how much I love to cause myself some harm
Did you even take a glance at the stitches on my wrist
Or is that just something you prefer would not exist?
Didn’t you take note of how I curse when I speak
Those aren’t words that a little girl should think
Wasn’t it kind of funny; I can’t look anyone in the eye
Or maybe you didn’t notice, because you didn’t try.
Isn’t it disturbing how Pain is my best friend
Because she is the only one who keeps coming back again
I thought I made this all, an obvious cry for help
But if you won’t relieve me, then I’ll relieve myself…
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Copyright 2004 TornPaperDoll
Published on Wednesday, January 28, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Wednesday, October 31, 2012, MorganaRose
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wrote:
I had someone who saw...but chose to ignore. Most people don't know how to answer the cry. This is an emotional write.
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A former member wrote:
People see but do not offer,
No, they allow us to suffer.
What a wake up call. This is an work of art :)
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A former member wrote:
People will never help other people. It only makes sense to save yourself.
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On Tuesday, March 8, 2011, Alexander
(4) wrote:
reading that was like being punched in the nutz! Love it!
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On Friday, March 12, 2004, Emptyness Inside Me
(171) wrote:
brutally sad, i agree with tim as well, very intense, great write ~Emptyness~
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On Wednesday, March 3, 2004, BoldSolitude
(214) wrote:
We all have scars either visual or internal, you expressed it so well. I especially liked "Isn’t it disturbing how Pain is my best friend Because she is the only one who keeps coming back again" So well said.
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On Thursday, January 29, 2004, Anybody_Killette
(47) wrote:
.. Wow.. it kinda describes me.. *sigh* Strange.. Good Write
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On Wednesday, January 28, 2004, yslehc
(334) wrote:
aww thats so sad.. this is exactly how i felt a couple years ago for awhile about my mom.... nice write
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