My Cry

By TornPaperDoll

Didn’t you see those marks lying on my arm
That show how much I love to cause myself some harm
Did you even take a glance at the stitches on my wrist
Or is that just something you prefer would not exist?
Didn’t you take note of how I curse when I speak
Those aren’t words that a little girl should think
Wasn’t it kind of funny; I can’t look anyone in the eye
Or maybe you didn’t notice, because you didn’t try.
Isn’t it disturbing how Pain is my best friend
Because she is the only one who keeps coming back again
I thought I made this all, an obvious cry for help
But if you won’t relieve me, then I’ll relieve myself…

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Copyright 2004 TornPaperDoll
Published on Wednesday, January 28, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • MorganaRose On Wednesday, October 31, 2012, MorganaRose (75)By person wrote:

    I had someone who saw...but chose to ignore. Most people don't know how to answer the cry. This is an emotional write.

  • A former member wrote: People see but do not offer, No, they allow us to suffer. What a wake up call. This is an work of art :)

  • A former member wrote: People will never help other people. It only makes sense to save yourself.

  • Alexander On Tuesday, March 8, 2011, Alexander (4)By person wrote:

    reading that was like being punched in the nutz! Love it!

  • Emptyness Inside Me On Friday, March 12, 2004, Emptyness Inside Me (171)By person wrote:

    brutally sad, i agree with tim as well, very intense, great write ~Emptyness~

  • BoldSolitude On Wednesday, March 3, 2004, BoldSolitude (214)By person wrote:

    We all have scars either visual or internal, you expressed it so well. I especially liked "Isn’t it disturbing how Pain is my best friend Because she is the only one who keeps coming back again" So well said.

  • Anybody_Killette On Thursday, January 29, 2004, Anybody_Killette (47)By person wrote:

    .. Wow.. it kinda describes me.. *sigh* Strange.. Good Write

  • yslehc On Wednesday, January 28, 2004, yslehc (334)By person wrote:

    aww thats so sad.. this is exactly how i felt a couple years ago for awhile about my mom.... nice write

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