Comments by All Members
- "wow. a brilliant write. Coincidentally I was just speaking of this incident yesterday...what a massacre it was, and you have expressed the horror exceptionally well."
Posted by flying_fox on "tiananmen square [june 89']" by manunkind
- "Wow! Absolutely breathtaking! I loved every second of it. I especially love the imagery. It was wonderful how you refered to fruit and jewels to create imagery. =-MO-="
Posted by Unknown on "imperfect in her perfection" by manunkind
- "so beautifully written ... this piece is an absolute treasure ... bittersweet in it's sadness despite her fortune ... took the gems literally , and enjoyed the write very much ... way cool ... funguy"
Posted by capt_funguy on "imperfect in her perfection" by manunkind
- "Whoa. This is just... stunning. Took my breath away. Love the format. Love the different characters you portrayed - you managed to characterise each one so well! Wow. Brilliant Write, Well Done! ~Wish Upon A Star"
Posted by Unknown on "lost girl" by manunkind
- "wow.. the flow was owsome.. I wonder if you used alot of time writing this or if it's the way your mind allways work. the first part was my favorite. but the whole poem was a trip around the world. the flow was amasing. Monkey :o)"
Posted by Dancing_Monkey on "lost girl" by manunkind
- "hmmm nice piece... the hard "scrubbing" feeling throughout... between the two speakers, interesting how it resolver, or rather, doesnt. sort of... "it is what it is" kind of thing."
Posted by Daemonicus on "dont touch me" by manunkind
- "Awesome. I like the way you made this, and the message is sound truth. Very nice work here."
Posted by Drifter on "lost girl" by manunkind
- "sorry to contradict , but you won me over .... lost girl who annihilates empires ..... that is a winner - funguy"
Posted by capt_funguy on "lost girl" by manunkind
- "The story you weave is like a film noir plot line. I could see the two characters, pain and disillusionment floating between the first to the second, the pain, and then the second to the first with their disillusionment about the world. Great emotional de"
Posted by crazyflax on "dont touch me" by manunkind
- "Ut-oh. I am running out of ways to praise your work. Pieces like this set a new standard for others to follow. Too original to ever be duplicated."
Posted by Recycled on "in exchange" by manunkind
- "Gosh. You just might be the first poet I have encountered on this site that I can relate fully with. Your works speak the words I have not found."
Posted by Recycled on "the conquerers" by manunkind
- "anyway i think this one is supposed to be read slowly. really take it in. once this is done you feel the superioty stabbing this poem. Although i was a bit confused at first i can now see the frusteration"
Posted by unusual_blood on "i reek of inferiority" by manunkind
- "please it's impossible that someone here hasn't had a low selfesteem. i for one used to be anorexic. that's beside the point. i can't believe i thought this of mrs.buttler! ugh such a moron. i for one"
Posted by unusual_blood on "i reek of inferiority" by manunkind
- "shit, i meant the ice queen. sry i'm polluting your comment area with so many comments. i just can't believe how much talent you've got. first time i read em' i didn't really take the time to see. now i have. SUPERB work"
Posted by unusual_blood on "pink nail polish" by manunkind
- "i re-read this poem, and i loved the symbols here of the colors, the little girl, the ice cream, and finally the puddle. ironic how we always want to be what we are not. i disagree, i think the repitition worked well"
Posted by unusual_blood on "pink nail polish" by manunkind
- "I'm glad I happened upon this one. It contains some excellent lines. Far too many to mention actually. I truly enjoyed this poem."
Posted by Unknown on "the conquerers" by manunkind
- "wow. this is .. you really took the words out of my mouth in this one. I'm full of shame for not being able to provide the right eulogy that this poem deserves. This one really touched me. deep down inside"
Posted by unusual_blood on "break the mirror" by manunkind
- ""like diamonds my bones" liked how you worded this one. (sentence and poem) The 4th stanza is insanly ingeniously brillant. (if THAT'S even possible!) I NEVER want to be found in my above either"
Posted by unusual_blood on "my above" by manunkind
- "shit, running outta space. it's a good thing, becasue these things should be written like that, and should be heard. What you write is soo true. ok, i'll stop taking up your space ;) Loved this one"
Posted by unusual_blood on "we, the artists" by manunkind
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