we, the artists
By manunkind
im new, so i dont know if i should be saying this. but i was inspired none
the less. this piece is aimed at no one.
The crown,
The crown?
What is the crown?
Acknowledge it
Worship it
Adore it
Hate it
Ignore it
It’s a figment
Of the imagination
A mirage
A hallucination
Despite the fronted image
There still lies the
Person behind
Be careful
Who you
Cross in rhyme
Be you decked with a crown
Or no more than a so called peasant
Be this dark poetry, or more so
Pleasant
There still lies the idea behind
Be careful when crossing
Darkened minds
No jewel will
Alter what I find
The crown
The crown?
What is the crown?
no gold will
change the
tainted
mind
Standing in front
Sneaking behind
It means what
You want it
It to mean
What you think
It to mean
Fights should
Not prevail
Amongst the home
Of saintly writers
We are artists,
Not fighters
again, aimed at no one. all i wanted to say was: people's poetry is treated
equally despite the "crown." that creativity can not be measured by the
"crown." even if it is an omen of hard work, we are still all equal on
this kick ass website. the end. :)
Comments on "we, the artists"
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On Sunday, November 13, 2005, Thorn
(282) wrote:
Epic. I really like it. I'm surprised it took me so long to stumble upon this, but I'm glad I did.
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On Thursday, December 18, 2003, unusual_blood
(74) wrote:
shit, running outta space. it's a good thing, becasue these things should be written like that, and should be heard. What you write is soo true. ok, i'll stop taking up your space ;) Loved this one
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On Thursday, December 18, 2003, unusual_blood
(74) wrote:
you can write about a subject, about anything that happens. I know this poem isn't entirely about that fight, but .. yuo've got this amazing way of writing portraying such deep feelings. Which is a
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On Thursday, December 18, 2003, unusual_blood
(74) wrote:
yes, we all are outsiders, and no matter how hard we fight, we will always be "new". thats the beauty here .. we all fit in here better than anywhere else. our dearest website. i just realized how well
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On Friday, December 12, 2003, manunkind
(64) wrote:
its hard not to. i guess its this whole complex built up from moving. im always the "new" person. "fit in" her than in a school. heh.
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On Friday, December 12, 2003, manunkind
(64) wrote:
agh. it deleted part of my comment. ok: *it wwas alot easier persay to-
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On Thursday, December 11, 2003, Drifter
(265) wrote:
i like this, although i've been the antaganist of a few arguments here. Good work, and stop considering yourself as an outsider. We all are.
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On Wednesday, December 10, 2003, Raze Drake
(85) wrote:
haha.......funny write, for the situation that happened.