Comments by All Members
- "Ya know, I can so relate this to pre-battle of much more then that which the bible speaks of. You've done such an excellent job capturing the rush of preperation and the morbid beauty of the pride and armor! This is wonderful. "
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "The Beginning of the End" by Methos
- "oh,yes!"Our salvation, our lust, our greed
Fulfilled only, when innocents bleed…."...awesome.the entire work is.great flow,vivid imagery...and it drips of mystery.Bravo,my brother!:)tim"
Posted by suicideseason on "The Gift of Darkness" by Methos
- "An enchanting write. I've read many poems about this subject...however most pale in comparison. Just absolutely amazing!"
Posted by Unknown on "The Gift of Darkness" by Methos
- ""Landing in a living hell."...sweet jesus!Arik,you're brilliant.i wish i could write like you do.very captivating,my brother.~tim"
Posted by suicideseason on "Insanity Consumed" by Methos
- "There aren't enough words of praise for your poetry. "Finding only the mirror beside her She withdrawals, picking up her damnation" Beautiful. "
Posted by Stellar on "Vanity" by Methos
- "Wow...that's such a blah comment. Ahem...let me try that again. The flow in this was amazing. Your ending wrapped up the poem in this neat little bundle of goodness. Overall...amazing work. :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Insanity Consumed" by Methos
- "I love this, it's so beautiful. The entire ending is completely awesome, as in awe-inspiring. Magnificent."
Posted by Stellar on "Insanity Consumed" by Methos
- ""Hate became a drug to which I was addicted" That line struck me. This reminded me of a movie I was watching the other day...He was trapped in a portrait...excellent poem."
Posted by Unknown on "Insanity Consumed" by Methos
- "this one touched me so much.. i look at the last three years of my life and i can completey relate... its so true how we become "addicted to hate" and seek revenge when loved ones fall, and it really is a living hell. i cant wait to read more of your wo"
Posted by Bluegoddess on "Insanity Consumed" by Methos
- "What we are inside is not always as beautiful as the being we protray, very nice I love this one, I think I shall keep it....................O."
Posted by Ophelia on "Insanity Consumed" by Methos
- "The landscape you wove together with the passing of time and innocense was very affective. I felt I saw/witnessed the ages pass into awareness of different sorts for her. Enjoyable read...but so very sad. ~JMDW~"
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "Fallen From Grace" by Methos
- "I touched the chill of the earth scarred by greif stricken chunks of concrete while reading this. Some poems have to much in them and too much behind them for me to feel like I can comment and not sound crass. So I'll leave it at that. ~JMDW~"
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "Anniversary of Misery" by Methos
- "hahaha, this is truly comedic, which is something I think alot of people run short on. Great way to lighten things up and do it with style. Nicely done."
Posted by sole on "Uncouth....." by Methos
- "Wow. It's tragic that apathy is clinged to by so many, but sometimes it takes the sacrifice of elation to curb out the lows that consume you. A great write and one that I'll ponder over."
Posted by sole on "Apathy." by Methos
- "So paradoxically inspiring. Acceptance to emptiness, wisdom in ignorace. Excellent theme and I couldn't think of a better way to portray it. Great write."
Posted by sole on "True emptiness" by Methos
- "a most lucid and melencholy reverance is set before us, there is a untainted and un affected feeling here.......your humble and balanced words explain all that you had to.........urban"
Posted by urbanhumility on "Younger Years...." by Methos
- "I love the stanzas of quotes, it really adds to the poem, helps captivate the audience :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Vanity" by Methos
- "A pleasure to read! Your style really works for me... ~Wish"
Posted by Unknown on "Desire" by Methos
- "This is beautiful. It stunned me... I must admit, I'm crying. ~Wish "
Posted by Unknown on "Vanity" by Methos
- "very nice,Methos.this one escaped me til now.very passionate.rock on,bro!~season"
Posted by suicideseason on "Desire" by Methos
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