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Desire
By Methos
Flesh laced with satin dresses
Curves of scuplted goddesses
Dancing
Sweating
Breathing
Harder
Faster
Luscious ruby lips
Batting blue eyes
Soft yet meaningful whispers
Moving
Closer
Together
Passionate loving kisses
Soft skin molded together
Blissful delight
Goodbyes
Sweet Dreams
Sunrise
Flesh laced with satin dresses
Desire
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Copyright 2003 Methos
Published on Monday, November 17, 2003.
Filed under:
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On Thursday, February 5, 2004, unusual_blood
(74)
wrote:
I thought I'd commented on this one already. Different style here, but it fits in just right. It has a sort of rythm to it that only increases the desire it has already provoked. Seems like you are starved, and this desire is your lover.
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A former member wrote:
Mmm...this provokes desire. Excellent wording and phrasing. Beats into your head...
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A former member wrote:
A pleasure to read! Your style really works for me... ~Wish
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On Tuesday, November 18, 2003, Ophelia
(221) wrote:
Such poetry enclosed and wraped in lust and hunger beautiful..........O.
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On Monday, November 17, 2003, Drea
(1388) wrote:
i love the wording. it flows together so well. wonderful ~Drea~
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