Uncouth.....
By Methos
I smile as i pass you,
your beauty calling me
your soft skin caressing me
luring me to become one with you
Your passion rising
rising until no longer,
can you hold it in
it's then i move slowly
just a touch...yes just right
then i submerge myself
until finally i'm wrapped
within your warmth
the sweet aroma of you all around
nothing else crosses my mind now,
i'm at one with you...
it seems as though we held
the moment of bliss
for hours....
until finally with a swift motion
i drain away the delirium
and rise forth from your grasp
..
turning back i smile
already dreaming of future engagements
i depart somewhat depressed
i simply love taking a bath.
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Copyright 2003 Methos
Published on Sunday, December 21, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Saturday, July 9, 2005, Sin
(1135) wrote:
this was very cute..i must admit my mind was in the gutter..but at least you went away clean ~kristy
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On Friday, January 2, 2004, sole
(93) wrote:
hahaha, this is truly comedic, which is something I think alot of people run short on. Great way to lighten things up and do it with style. Nicely done.
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A former member wrote:
He he...I read this earlier...I failed to comment for some reason...man I really do want a bath now. Mmm...
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On Monday, December 22, 2003, Dancing_Monkey
(1228) wrote:
Damn.. I love it when I get supriced like this.. wonderfull write, I like the way that you posty your writes and your use of ...
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A former member wrote:
*shakes head* lol, makes me want to go bathe, now..... or is it that I simply stink? neat read
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A former member wrote:
lol, that's really funny-you had me for a moment-well done...Ashes
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On Sunday, December 21, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm
(1580) wrote:
Ha, ha! Funny!