Vanity
By Methos
the room swirls into ripples of colors
as she lies upon her canopy bed
the tears falling from her eyes
form a pool of sorrow,
on her beloved satin red sheets
“you can’t carry this on…”
“i’m so worried about you…”
“for gods sake please…”
the whispers ascending upon her
pain invokes a rage within her lungs
causing a prolonged fit of coughing
gasping for air she sees the plate
that was left for her to devour
“please eat, you need your strength…”
“darling you mustn’t….”
“please lord watch over…”
Stretching out her skeletal hand
She reaches for salvation
Finding only the mirror beside her
She withdrawals, picking up her damnation
Staring into its vastness, she weeps
“….”
“….”
“please…”
a woman once angelic, stares
within the deluded mirror
seeing only her beauty,
her thin frame, flowing hair
her perfection, she witnesses
the mirror in its stillness
reflects her image,
ghastly bones protrude from once healthy skin,
wrinkles form lines of truth upon her face
hair is matted and tangled, resembling
the webs of lies she forms within her mind
her eyes, gray and opaque, seem lifeless
“I don’t believe I shall eat.”
“isn’t that right mirror of mine?”
silence falls..
quietly within her hell she sees
her beauty still reflecting
laying down her demise,
she falls to rest
still reflecting an image
of her pale skin,
wrapped loosely over
her small shattered frame
never decieving, her inane mind.
Comments on "Vanity"
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A former member wrote:
I love the stanzas of quotes, it really adds to the poem, helps captivate the audience :)
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A former member wrote:
This is beautiful. It stunned me... I must admit, I'm crying. ~Wish
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On Tuesday, December 23, 2003, Lemons
(46) wrote:
The truth is beautiful.
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On Tuesday, December 23, 2003, Ophelia
(221) wrote:
*stands in awe* very good,,,,,,,,O.
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On Tuesday, December 23, 2003, sole
(93) wrote:
This is an awesome poem Methos I'll have to check out some more of your work. You painted a vivid picture and delivered a strong message, everything I love about poetry. Thanks
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A former member wrote:
Damn man...This is just...heart-wrenching. and I've known people like this...this is...just to real. I don't think I have enough words...and I just realized...you aren't on my favorites yet. *slaps hand* Bad me.
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A former member wrote:
Okay...fixed that problem. You are a joy to read with the emotion you instill in your poetry.