Comments by All Members
- "sneaky and kinda cubist... in the mind... i dunno, sometimes it's hard to describe what words do to me... these are lukewarm words, and they feel like they should be."
Posted by Jonas on "A Monet Sky" by liquid_emotion
- "Very nice. Of course I love all of your work liquid. You never cease to make me smile. Or sad, whichever way the poem is written, or um....you get what I mean."
Posted by Six-Out on "A Monet Sky" by liquid_emotion
- "smoke, invisible but ever so palpable hovers above my head, swirling with all the thoughts and forgotten memories a child of twenty should or shouldn't have... stoned with the lights out."
Posted by Jonas on "Through The Obvious" by liquid_emotion
- ""A million pens itching to scratch it in stone, A thousand lips parting to let out a groan" that
is just excellent. No wasted lines or filler; every couplet could stand alone and have
meaning."
Posted by Stranger on "Handmade Thoughts" by liquid_emotion
- "The title of the poem alone demands comment; which is very cool by the way. I liked this
allot. It is hard not to empathize while reading it. Very consistent intensity and pace from the
first line to the last as well."
Posted by Stranger on "Grasping For Stars In The Light Of Day" by liquid_emotion
- "The repetition of the six months added a great effect to the work as a whole...thanks for the welcome!"
Posted by Unknown on "Fine Print" by liquid_emotion
- "nicely captured ... the moment inwhich we all live to experience .. a perfect fluid running down into the state of total trancendance ... wonderful write: "
Posted by DoctorAsh on "Flowing" by liquid_emotion
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