Through The Obvious

Darkness
Renders me speechless
Eternally silent
Alone in my
Memories

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Published on Wednesday, April 23, 2003. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Through The Obvious"

On Thursday, April 24, 2003, cre (410) wrote:

Excellent .. yer such a clever thing :P I enjoyed this one, another great job.
A former member wrote: This poem is nice. I've always loved to recall DREAMs and analyze them. You did so with clever art. :)
On Wednesday, April 23, 2003, Jonas (715) wrote:

i NEVER get those goddam accronym riddle poems. that's ok though. nice write. have you read dave's tic tac poem?
On Wednesday, April 23, 2003, liquid_emotion (323) wrote:

I will now.
On Wednesday, April 23, 2003, Jonas (715) wrote:

smoke, invisible but ever so palpable hovers above my head, swirling with all the thoughts and forgotten memories a child of twenty should or shouldn't have... stoned with the lights out.
A former member wrote: I think this poem is amazing! Even thought it's short, it uses powerful images to paint pictures. It's just lush :)
On Wednesday, April 23, 2003, liquid_emotion (323) wrote:

well, it's short for good reason... through the obvious :) thank you so very much.