Comments by All Members
- "omg! can i marry this work? this is amazing.. it was..just amazing..stopped my brain from functioning..i cant think of words good enough to describe it. I LOVE THIS! :) keep writing my dear friend. ♥"
Posted by BrokenKatra on "All That's Done" by deathndismay
- "So good, yet so sad.
I can kinda relate to this so I like it a lot. I like the way it flows."
Posted by Unknown on "I Bleed" by deathndismay
- "Kind of came to me as an apocalyptic piece, brilliantly accomplished if so, such vivid imagery and the choice of words is excellent rendering it something quite magnificent. Cheers for the read~ Can I have front row seat too? ;D Watch it burst to flame~ Ta-ta ^ ^"
Posted by Symbol on "All That's Done" by deathndismay
- "This is very powerful! "In the goblet of fire that flows like a flood" is especially moving. Thank you for the read and thank you for the comments. "
Posted by Unknown on "Damned" by deathndismay
- "All of our time is running out and we tend to cling onto that single thread of desperation, because everything is falling away too quickly and before we know it our hourglass is empty. A haunting truth. Thank you very much for sharing, something I can relate to... one of the many thoughts that disturb... Cheers. Keep writing ^ ^"
Posted by Symbol on "Hourglass" by deathndismay
- "Thank you, I wrote it while listening to music, kinda adapted some of the flow... Appreciate your comments..."
Posted by deathndismay on "Hourglass" by deathndismay
- "wow darlin' this is an awesome curse! My favorite forum, rhyme. I have tried to master other forms but the words just don't fit together right. they sound contrite to me anyway. many blessing and merry christmas ~PD"
Posted by PoetessDarkly on "Damned" by deathndismay
- "Compelling prayer, the wording for it brings it to life, the emotions of it. 10/10 rated from me :) Write on. "
Posted by Symbol on "Lost prayer" by deathndismay
- "welcome to dp. this is thick with sadness, like a weight on a frail man's chest. seems very personal. thanks for sharing."
Posted by natalie on "Kiss of Death" by deathndismay
- "This is something very powerful, like a soul-aria. I feel like this should be spoken and performed. ... an ache to be burned away into solace ash. "
Posted by Kaleidoscope_Heart on "Lost prayer" by deathndismay
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