Hourglass

By deathndismay

Hourglass, soon to pass, the hour of demise.
Come to pass, looking back, while bleeding through the eyes.
Hourglass, so fast to lapse, taking what is mine.
Sands of time, now relapse, the grain is so divine.
Hourglass, take away, all that has been given.
Seasons pass, break in vain, remaining unforgiven.
Hourglass, the pendulum, is swaying like a scythe.
You shall burn away from me the essence of my life.
Hourglass, upon the stand, your sands shall melt away.
Hanging from the tree of life, by rope I die this day.

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Copyright 2012 deathndismay
Published on Tuesday, December 4, 2012.     Filed under: "Philosophical" and "Poetry"

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  • FearlessDragon On Tuesday, December 25, 2012, FearlessDragon (137)By person wrote:

    Great read here, very compelling.

  • Alchemist On Monday, December 10, 2012, Alchemist (679)By person wrote:

    The flow and tempo is great man.

  • deathndismay On Monday, December 24, 2012, deathndismay (92)By person wrote:

    Thank you, I wrote it while listening to music, kinda adapted some of the flow... Appreciate your comments...

  • A former member wrote: haunting flow. thoroughly explored. sick pen, bro. thanks.

  • deathndismay On Monday, December 24, 2012, deathndismay (92)By person wrote:

    Thank you!!!! I hope my pens not sick though, I need it... LOL...

  • dwells On Tuesday, December 4, 2012, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Very poignant and well postulated. The eye bleeding sounds like hemhorrhagic fever maybe, but then you'd be in no mood to write. Seriously, this was darkly despairing - cheers!

  • deathndismay On Tuesday, December 4, 2012, deathndismay (92)By person wrote:

    Just starting. Thank you.

  • Markus Darkscribe On Tuesday, December 4, 2012, Markus Darkscribe (60)By person wrote:

    Time is short live life to the fullest and all that crap. i like your take and the hourglass analogy Good flow and rhyme as well.

  • deathndismay On Tuesday, December 4, 2012, deathndismay (92)By person wrote:

    I appreciate your support.

  • haunted On Tuesday, December 4, 2012, haunted (837)By person wrote:

    when its your time...its your time! cool little poem about how life is basically borrowed time. i just wish i could see my sands of time. i'd max my frikkin credit cards with time to enjoy my spendings. awesome mr. death!

  • deathndismay On Tuesday, December 4, 2012, deathndismay (92)By person wrote:

    Credit rocks. Life sucks. live it up lol

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