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Hourglass
By deathndismay
Hourglass, soon to pass, the hour of demise.
Come to pass, looking
back, while bleeding through the eyes.
Hourglass, so fast to lapse,
taking what is mine.
Sands of time, now relapse, the grain is so divine.
Hourglass, take away, all that has been given.
Seasons pass, break
in vain, remaining unforgiven.
Hourglass, the pendulum, is swaying
like a scythe.
You shall burn away from me the essence of my life.
Hourglass, upon the stand, your sands shall melt away.
Hanging from
the tree of life, by rope I die this day.
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Copyright 2012 deathndismay
Published on Tuesday, December 4, 2012.
Filed under: "Philosophical" and
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
Running out of time....Comments on "Hourglass"
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On Tuesday, December 25, 2012, FearlessDragon
(138)
wrote:
Great read here, very compelling.
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On Monday, December 10, 2012, Alchemist
(688) wrote:
The flow and tempo is great man.
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On Monday, December 24, 2012, deathndismay
(93) wrote:
Thank you, I wrote it while listening to music, kinda adapted some of the flow... Appreciate your comments...
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A former member wrote:
haunting flow. thoroughly explored. sick pen, bro. thanks.
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On Monday, December 24, 2012, deathndismay
(93) wrote:
Thank you!!!! I hope my pens not sick though, I need it... LOL...
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On Tuesday, December 4, 2012, dwells
(4284) wrote:
Very poignant and well postulated. The eye bleeding sounds like hemhorrhagic fever maybe, but then you'd be in no mood to write. Seriously, this was darkly despairing - cheers!
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On Tuesday, December 4, 2012, deathndismay
(93) wrote:
Just starting. Thank you.
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On Tuesday, December 4, 2012, Markus Darkscribe
(60) wrote:
Time is short live life to the fullest and all that crap. i like your take and the hourglass analogy Good flow and rhyme as well.
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On Tuesday, December 4, 2012, deathndismay
(93) wrote:
I appreciate your support.
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On Tuesday, December 4, 2012, haunted
(849) wrote:
when its your time...its your time! cool little poem about how life is basically borrowed time. i just wish i could see my sands of time. i'd max my frikkin credit cards with time to enjoy my spendings. awesome mr. death!
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On Tuesday, December 4, 2012, deathndismay
(93) wrote:
Credit rocks. Life sucks. live it up lol
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