Comments by All Members
- "Often the greatest blow is dealt to oneself. This piece brings a bit of light to that. Great feeling and meaning, without a thousand bells and whistles. Good write. +tpu+"
Posted by TheProphetUntold on "foaming at the mouth." by eidos
- "ouch...my first love and i had a similar experience, he also walked away. very bitter topic, title matches perfectly. nice write, really hits you hard. "
Posted by iceshot11 on "it is not beautiful nor good." by eidos
- "wow, so near what I felt after the end of a short intense and heartfelt Online romances.
gets no better when they discard what you feel as "obsession".
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Posted by BetaWolfinVA on "the unbreaking of self." by eidos
- "I agree with Cipher. This is honest. Simple. But the simple words are ones that bring forth complexity in emotion and thought from the reader. i enjoyed. "
Posted by Dei on "it is not beautiful nor good." by eidos
- "There have been so many poems that have proved to me just how amazing you are but this is hands down my favorite, god I tried to write this poem before and failed. I am so happy I've been fortunate enough to read your work."
Posted by Dreaming in Stanzas on "in between the speech and the being." by eidos
- "It sounds like something of a Hallmark mentality, words from someone else's heart. Brief and biting, that's the ticket."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "one up." by eidos
- ":) i have seen this, a couple times.... like a faked orgasm. (sorry...you had my mind going in all sorts of places with this one.)
very cool wording!"
Posted by natalie on "one up." by eidos
- "Sounds like a tale of two prides, each too stubborn to submit to the truth. Succinctly painted."
Posted by Cyll Kroepe on "one up." by eidos
- "i actually think this feels quite like salt on a wound, a quick slice and then make it sting a little more. it was brief. and very clear in its pain. thanks."
Posted by Unknown on "cleanse" by eidos
- "I always took your words with salt... until my throat was too shriveled to whisper back .... my love. I think that's what I was thinking... dunno... but I want it to be sharper... and more curt. anyways... just some thoughts, do what you will... thank you."
Posted by The Dybbuk on "cleanse" by eidos
- "that's harsh... but i hear you.. and feel this a whole lot. "
Posted by natalie on "cleanse" by eidos
- "I like this.... the concept, but I'd like to make it more powerful somehow... tinker with the timing and the selection. but I like it, thanks."
Posted by The Dybbuk on "cleanse" by eidos
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