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subjective in nature.
By eidos
I used to believe that watching the person you loved,
cry
was the worst feeling in the world. Until I watched her scream
that she hated who I made her become.
The way her lips curled in
pure anger as the words reached into my chest.
I hated who I became
at that moment, the way I turned stone-like
and just watched as she
turned to leave. The way I felt it in every muscle in my body
that
I wanted to reach out and stop her, but my pride wouldn't let me.
The
way that my hands stayed at my sides,
it made me realize that the
worst feeling in the world
is not feeling at all.
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Copyright 2012 eidos
Published on Monday, September 24, 2012.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Tuesday, November 6, 2012, Oliver Twisted
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wrote:
The burdens of regret & pride at its prime. Such is life. I was here at one point.
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A former member wrote:
i really hold that true. that not feeling is the worst "feeling" of all. it scares me. and really, i think that it isn't that i don't feel anything, i am just choosing to ignore what i am feeling. which makes me feel as if i'm lying. which makes me feel worse. and i just gave up giving up. it doesn't do me any good. i feel what i feel. LOL. cool write. thanks.
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A former member wrote:
I too have said and done nothing for the sake of pride... it makes you wonder why. Feeling indifferent yourself is one thing, but to have someone be indifferent to you is near torture. I can relate to this, thanks for sharing
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