Comments by All Members
- "I hope you one day publish a book of your works. Your poetry has that rare quality of making the reader thirsty for the next piece. A genuine page turner. "
Posted by carlosjackal on "serenades in static" by eidos
- "Your command of the English language is so good and your pieces so clever, that any comment left under the poem pales in comparison. "
Posted by carlosjackal on "rubbernecker" by eidos
- "Loving your poetic style..Succinct brevity that packs a real and delightful punch with Bukowski-esque wisdom."
Posted by carlosjackal on "jig-zag" by eidos
- "There is no doubt in my mind now why you were recommended to me. A level of relation such as that from the abused to the abuser is unheard of. I would have no sympathy for them. Perhaps gratification though. "
Posted by sIo on "foaming at the mouth." by eidos
- "Plain and simple I can't read this twice because it's so close to home. I strive for this level of poetry and take my hat off to those who bleed it. "
Posted by sIo on "it is not beautiful nor good." by eidos
- "Ache me to pieces. It's like gasping for air to breathe and swallowing for water to drink simultaneously because you're suffocating and dehydrating all at once."
Posted by sIo on "falling sheets." by eidos
- "the 'context' can be twisted by the views of others, the interpretations of others, the impossibility of anyone to really dive inside the 'context' of your thoughts and feelings...the vague Screwtape Letters feeling imbued by the extreme form of virtue in 'saint', possibly misplaced (deliberately) and sarcastic...i enjoy your style"
Posted by Unknown on "context isn't a friend." by eidos
- ""When you told me that she tasted like fresh cut grass
I thought you had your words mixed up..." This was an outstanding piece, with so many images and experiences tapped into in so few words. Poetry indeed! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "the truth doesn't care" by eidos
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