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rubbernecker
By eidos
it's like reading a book
and you're getting to the point that your heart
starts to beat faster. when you want
nothing more than to tap the brakes
so you can tell your friends
how you felt at just that moment
that it all came crashing down.
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Copyright 2013 eidos
Published on Thursday, May 2, 2013.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Saturday, April 8, 2023, carlosjackal
(2788)
wrote:
Your command of the English language is so good and your pieces so clever, that any comment left under the poem pales in comparison.
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On Monday, January 14, 2019, Jonas Robinson
(848) wrote:
Short but to the point. It's quite a hypnotic poem. :)
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On Thursday, May 2, 2013, HeadpatSlut
(257) wrote:
The message here is pretty clear, but the diction in the second to last line doesn't fit too well, I don't think, the "you" doesn't belong there, I don't think, other than that I like this, clean cut and direct, thanks for sharing :)
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A former member wrote:
Very good write! I like the simplicity you used in this. I like also how you told a story of the 'doing something only if you'll get recognized for doing it', keep it up! I like your style,
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