the problem with immortality

By eidos






I used to believe that I would live forever
then I met you, and realized that one day you would die.
now I only hope that my beliefs
are completely wrong.





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Copyright 2012 eidos
Published on Friday, November 30, 2012.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • carlosjackal On Saturday, March 11, 2023, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    Diamond writing.

  • A former member wrote: Very short, very sweet, very touching. Immortality, like every thing in this world we strive for, has its cost. The question is, what would you pay, and for how long. Excellently wrought.

  • Dreaming in Stanzas On Sunday, December 16, 2012, Dreaming in Stanzas (293)By person wrote:

    This is so sweet, I hope someday someone will write me a poem this beautiful..

  • Star On Thursday, December 13, 2012, Star (879)By person wrote:

    this is saddening and beautiful. i could almost cry with it.. omg wonderful work you have.. wow.. (:

  • Strataic On Friday, November 30, 2012, Strataic (99)By person wrote:

    To watch as your loved one died before your eyes and you can do nothing to stop the natural process, travesty.. Thanks Scholar

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