Comments by All Members
- "WOW this just makes me want to cry not for it being sad but it being amazing..Your son must be proud of his mom...;)"
Posted by Unknown on "Unalloyed" by Maladroit
- "beautiful sentiments expressed to one who, someday, should read this. I like the braille line... how they will seek out that assurance... just being there. The head on the chest segment, with the whisperings, made me think of bedtime stories... the warm hushed voice reverberating to the sleep anointed... all so very motherly... laughing hysterics... good times. thanks."
Posted by The Dybbuk on "Unalloyed" by Maladroit
- "Yeah I got that too (yay me): 'I can fit it all into my hands' and 'but I love you more than what arms can carry', and that you told me you had a 2-year-old earlier, were what made it clear for me. Very well written nocturnal sentiments. I have no doubt you are the hero you wish to be perceived. "
Posted by Jedi MindFuck on "Unalloyed" by Maladroit
- "this is very beautiful. the poetics that defies gravity..enlightening..sublime in such a special way. much enjoyed. thank you~"
Posted by tindomerel on "Unalloyed" by Maladroit
- "I agree with Karen's analysis. this has a motherly tone. well expressed. thanks."
Posted by Patches on "Unalloyed" by Maladroit
- "mmm what darkblue quoted is also the standout lines for me ... after the second reading , I got the impression you were speaking of a child rather than a lover...it's beautiful "
Posted by kinkifrog on "Unalloyed" by Maladroit
- "i love how your words can be whispered into feathery images...the flow is so incredibly soft that i can just float away and sway with the ripples...but this touched me the most "hoping my love finds you subliminally and maybe I am weaving myself into your brainwaves"...maybe because there's a part of my soul that still believes.wishes for magic...thank you for this gorgeous melody..."
Posted by DarkBlueClearWater on "Unalloyed" by Maladroit
- "There is not one single fucking word I can type to grasp where my mind is at.. This just got you faved and I swear it's you i'm fucking tonight. As you lay me down to sleep Your words exhale the soul I keep.. Damnnnnnnnnnnn girll....."
Posted by Devilish on "Unalloyed" by Maladroit
- "wow ,i am so fucking impressed,very visual your description of this relationship,flawless"
Posted by Unknown on "Entropy" by Maladroit
- "dis.order and
order
to pick those pockets
how you tap dance on my amygdala
do all women lie?
Just when sleeping?
Oh you're good..."
Posted by Unknown on "Entropy" by Maladroit
- "OMG!!! That just about took my breathe away..What an amazing poem. Yes that would be wonderful but we all know there is no man out there like it sadly..."
Posted by Unknown on "Sex with a Box" by Maladroit
- "wow, thats really beautiful. i loved your descriptions and details. it paints a lovely picture. thanks for sharing!"
Posted by haunted on "Sex with a Box" by Maladroit
- "This is simply amazing. "Inspire cotton-candied words to spew from your mouth serving sticks of hope to a circus of bystanders confirming, that tickets- for something like this really exist." I LOVE that part... great job! :) "
Posted by xZombie Poptartzx on "DNR" by Maladroit
- "hmmm storytellers ... how they make words bend... rhetoricians, perhaps... engaging audiences from afar with rakish flare, maybe... DNR, do not read? there's always a risk in opening up the mind to serriform words... is not the mind the way to the heart, sometimes? Much enjoyed, thanks."
Posted by The Dybbuk on "DNR" by Maladroit
- "I love the line I have planted trauma in manure, especially when coupled with the year and month line from before. Also I like how you carry the idea through out the work."
Posted by Alchemist on "Kudzu Memoir" by Maladroit
- "You are a poet and a raconteur yourself and always pick the right words, I can tell you have a beautiful soul. Thanks for a perfect morning read. And "The Raconteurs" are a great band too by the way."
Posted by Alchemist on "DNR" by Maladroit
- "I could feel the pulse. Taste the rhythm. This was deliciously written."
Posted by Six-Out on "DNR" by Maladroit
- "I too enjoyed this spectacular piece. Thank you for all ur comments- very much appreciated :)"
Posted by Symbol on "DNR" by Maladroit
- "This is quite a ride, so visual and rushing. Operatic, almost. I thoroughly enjoyed this."
Posted by Amaryllis on "DNR" by Maladroit
- "This was intense to say the least. Wonderful vocabulary, it also places many of my writes into perspective. Thank you for your comments, I changed the structure and it was indeed the right choice. "
Posted by Unknown on "Ameliorating me to Deaf" by Maladroit
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