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Ameliorating me to Deaf
By Maladroit
That caustic natured speech
never awarded you my mascara stains
a catalyst
serving me
a catharsis
You can't seem to coin a bygone-
Rewiring a cerebral rewind,
so you can pocket that candor.
Capacious mouth-
hold those words!
Bandying doesn't run one way,
so you dropped wordy bombs
on disengaged ears....
And it must be hard
to watch pierced diamonds shine-
without you.
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Copyright 2012 Maladroit
Comments on "Ameliorating me to Deaf"
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A former member wrote:
This was intense to say the least. Wonderful vocabulary, it also places many of my writes into perspective. Thank you for your comments, I changed the structure and it was indeed the right choice.
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On Monday, August 13, 2012, FadedBlues
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wrote:
..you're a pioneer of provocation, following in the steps of Helen Gurley Brown...
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On Monday, August 13, 2012, Devilish
(2658) wrote:
Oh and one more thing.. I think by far you are one of the best writers.. ANd my grammar sucks ass and I still haven't learned to spell everything right but I dig the fuck out of you.
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On Monday, August 13, 2012, Devilish
(2658) wrote:
hmm so now I see that everytime I read you I cum.. This is a totally different style from your norm.. But never the less your golden..
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