Comments by All Members
- "very wonderful. the grit comes off the page and so does the girl so to speak. makes me look harder at all the reasons i write and all the reasons i do not. thanks."
Posted by Unknown on "Signed, The Greedy Poet" by Maladroit
- "fascinating. I love the tone, the disdain of the one who seems to have the control in the relationship..."
Posted by Unknown on "Entropy" by Maladroit
- "My god I hate to love you .. You are my favorite mistress of strikes.. Like a venomous snake. I love it .. Everytime I read you I feel like i've came.. mmmmmmm... please don't mind that i use your lines to get off..."
Posted by Devilish on "Signed, The Greedy Poet" by Maladroit
- "ah the vicissitudes of lassitude... did you mean 'enervating' up there *points*... such is the psychological parasite... one who enervates and saps the succor from life, no, not no relief.... from the pusillanimous existence that remains behind... lingering in the afterglow of those who feed off the will of others, maybe. non fiction. interesting read, thanks."
Posted by The Dybbuk on "Signed, The Greedy Poet" by Maladroit
- "The things I would do to you if ever the chance.my god i wanna suck on your thinking stick and swallow the rest of you.. damn girl.. when you post you make your presence felt.. ill take it with me for later .. i love your poetry."
Posted by Devilish on "Alley Cat Habits" by Maladroit
- "wow. That bit about wading past the shallow and into the depths of you... that was beautiful and brilliant imagery. very nice. "
Posted by Dei on "Sex with a Twin" by Maladroit
- "*consistent* is there not a beyond the fairytale... a way of welcoming imperfection... of relaxing the need for endings... or for avoiding them.... a way of denouncing forever and packaged tidings.... where optimism becomes less than a romanticized naivete... and following through just means being comfortable without knowing tomorrow? surely this can't be unattainable? thanks."
Posted by The Dybbuk on "Boxed Beginnings" by Maladroit
- "for some reason, those 'just for today' moments hurt more than the rest. You see the ending, but you can't stop it. This hurt. Wonderful."
Posted by eidos on "Boxed Beginnings" by Maladroit
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