Comments by All Members
- "Undeniable skill .. some one of your caliber could stand alone on just one of your gifts. my momma always told me ( a horrid mother she was) that a woman can be beautiful until she opens her mouth. even when only sending soft notes in silence . you make addiction sound so inviting .. where do i sign my soul. fuck me mala.."
Posted by Devilish on "Powder Parallels " by Maladroit
- "Grandma had a wonderful lilac bush growing next to her back porch, still remember it all these years now. This was a wistful piece, wonderfully wrought, and the worrying only bothers those who give a damn, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Powder Parallels " by Maladroit
- "...pardon me for staring, your serene beauty is overpowering. the nearly-perfect art of you. have you also invented grace?..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "Powder Parallels " by Maladroit
- "Woah! This is beyond amazing. Well crafted & love the association with hues. "so I wring my hands a lot
like I invented worrying
gripping for perception
to soar into focus
reiterate the value of sorting minus snorting
pursuing pill palaces and powder parallels
have her persistently plummeting
pulsating, pale-
past" definitely relate to that. Much enjoyed :)"
Posted by Deathkitten on "Powder Parallels " by Maladroit
- "immaculate and pointedly beautiful in concept and execution. "so I wring my hands a lot like I invented worrying." I feel like your muse's ugly twin. you are a mistress of wordplay. your alliteration and the purpose with which you write is for me a recurring wet dream. i read this in a haze, and my comments feel like smoke signals in a peopleless world. insubstantial. moot. a weak and ignorant plea for you to see.... i wish i could show you what you do to me. i wish i could do the same for you. i want to thrust my heart's weary drugged moon worshipping blood through the wires and give you something to fill your kneading hands... a warmth, my love and devotion for you. i wish, i wish, i wish upon fading stars and my pulled Lancombe-drunk eyelashes with all of my inconsequential being that you will somehow know what a rare stellar poignant beauty you are inside and out. you somehow not only reach me through my snow comas but make me BELIEVE again, make me want to believe. i have daydreamt of your hand in mine and my lips on your temple, of us wandering through forests of malcontent and melancholy and finding arrowheads and fairies and wondering our ways through clouds of stray epiphanies, reaching a peace without words as sisters, lovers, friends. i want to kiss your wrist and make your heart flutter with its fullness. i want to give you flowers and evermores. your words lift my chin and cradle the child in me. i don't know how to thank you... how to give it back. i love you fathomless amounts, bethany. xo"
Posted by Unknown on "Powder Parallels " by Maladroit
- "The imagery in the description is so vivid... But do I catch a glimpse of bitter cynism in this "wish-list"? Very intriguing piece to say the least, many thanks for sharing (:"
Posted by Unknown on "Sex with a Box" by Maladroit
- "Ralph Waldo should be an appetizer! Much enjoyed and if opposites attract, then the poet will become magnetic to the Neanderthal perhaps, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Sex with a Box" by Maladroit
- ""I decorate my mantle
with jars of your preserved heartache" Loved that line..as well everything else but that one stuck with me. You have an amazing talent with words. I adore the images you capture with pen. I can relate to this as well to give and do and help, in the end we are usually left with the mess and the broken pieces ..which we have to clean up. I'm glad I found you on here, Love your work hon. It reflects beauty and sadness..you capture it all."
Posted by River Lily on "Organic You" by Maladroit
- "Enigmatic and still pondering the zinc (electrodes maybe?). Let the wounds proclaim so the mind doesn't have to bother with the words. Cheers and a pitcher of lemonade sounds great, lightly sweetened!"
Posted by dwells on "Circumstantial Evidence" by Maladroit
- "I hope my only grandson can find that girl, somewhere, as he comes of age - they are special people. Heartfelt piece and I got a vibe from Corinthian when you mentioned the color blue, thank you."
Posted by dwells on "Send the Girl Tip-Toes" by Maladroit
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