Comments by All Members
- "Beautifull poem. Just a pity the poor guy sound so hopeless. ;( Enjoyed it. "
Posted by Unknown on "Desire" by DavidVale
- "welcome to dp.
i believe that sometimes though we think it best not to let someone know our feelings, they should be told. for they too may harbour similar feelings for you...venture forth bravely..even brave soldiers lose wars sometimes."
Posted by natalie on "Please Do" by DavidVale
- "...nicely done. better to have a dream for a moment, rather than no dream at all (altho many would disagree)..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "Desire" by DavidVale
- "Beautiful imagery. Very well written for your first poem. In a way it reminds me of Sirens in mythology. Beautiful but disastrous."
Posted by Unknown on "Desire" by DavidVale
- "Lonely but well written. Sometimes it is good to be selfless but it can also be good to take the risk."
Posted by Unknown on "Please Do" by DavidVale
- "Oh what a dream to dream, "And with the world, the man burnt to" such a beautiful and sad line, to sacrifice all hope and possibility for the longing for that half remembered moment of perfection"
Posted by Lylani on "Desire" by DavidVale
- "Breaking up is all those things, yes.. Why do people stop talking to each other? "And just like that, what is became was" - like an execution. The perfect ending."
Posted by Unknown on "Our End" by DavidVale
- "This sounds very personal and coming from a lonely place. It's just too selfless for me... If ever I chose not to confess my love, it wasn't because I wanted the person to be happy. It was because the world I had created around my love was just too perfect, I knew there was no chance reality could ever match it."
Posted by Unknown on "Please Do" by DavidVale
- "What a tender and gentle piece that we can all relate to, thanks so much!"
Posted by dwells on "[Unread]" by DavidVale
- "What an exquisite heart wrenching vignette...amazing flow and structure ..loved the last stanza in particular...but i do wish the poet will find content soon...i like your work thank you for sharing"
Posted by DarkBlueClearWater on "An Ending" by DavidVale
- "Oh confusion is the worst...i really like the simplicity of the way you display this much complicated situation and your emotions...hope it will work out soon...thank you for sharing"
Posted by DarkBlueClearWater on "Trying to Define..." by DavidVale
- "Your rhyme and rhythm is perfectly on time. I'm impressed by you . You sorta lingered in the background. you need to read others and explore the community so they can come back to you and discover this. you are worth reading,..=).."
Posted by Devilish on "I met a girl..." by DavidVale
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