Comments by All Members
- "woman, i been here. "to be great is to be misunderstood" well, in a world full of those who don't, it can be depressing. thank you for having courage....stick around, the world needs you."
Posted by Unknown on "Everyone in pain knows how to die..." by Storm
- "This is utterly astounding. Delicate, beautiful, hazy beams of muted light reflecting from a small life. . extroardinary ~ Rose"
Posted by Unknown on ""Here birdy-birdy"" by Storm
- "This is impeccable...A truly beautiful wistful feel to it that pervades uncannily..."you denied whatever truth you sought to find" Vacker..."
Posted by Solace on "Skulptur av Is" by Storm
- "wow, I really like this piece! a lot of emotion here ... great write!!"
Posted by Nightwing on "Hate Me" by Storm
- "It has been a while since I have read one of your poems, stormy. '...euphoric reveries shatter like glass
against your wall of exquisite suffering...' This was my favorite part...Great job, cutie. =)"
Posted by BleedSilver on ""Here birdy-birdy"" by Storm
- "this was really intense... strong at the same time.. you captured the essence so beautifully..."
Posted by Zhee on ""Here birdy-birdy"" by Storm
- ""euphoric reveries shatter like glass
against your wall of exquisite suffering" such a fantastic line.. I too felt this and it was indeed intense.. so much anguish and belittlement.. Excellent work."
Posted by Lynaes on ""Here birdy-birdy"" by Storm
- "I told you I loved this one...And I do really, the imagery of sucking for air, pain filled lungs is just a horror in and of itself... [Come back to life] Can they, can anyone get up off and fly, perhaps, maybe if we just flap our wings we can fly..."
Posted by Solace on ""Here birdy-birdy"" by Storm
- "Oh my. This was so intense and so raw. I FELT every single word you wrote and THAT is amazing. I could peel this apart with quotes that I loved... wow. I felt a cage. I felt a bloody cage. -Glass"
Posted by glasshouse on ""Here birdy-birdy"" by Storm
- "wow, this is so powerful, you present the pain so visually, "And every strained breath rips like claws Inside of your bleeding lungs"..... and that last line.... I just love it, am in love with it. Thank you."
Posted by Lotophagi on ""Here birdy-birdy"" by Storm
- "This was so powerful.i love the feel of it...defeated,yet determined...the imagery was disturbingly vivid...awesome read."
Posted by suicideseason on ""Here birdy-birdy"" by Storm
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