Hate Me

By Storm

If I could do one single thing
I'd erase you from my mind
There's nothing I wouldn't sacrifice
make me deaf, kill my sense, make me blind
But nothing is going to take away
this pain you make me feel
With every breath you open up a wound
that will not heal
With every fucking breath you take
I hate you even more
And while you go unbruised from this
I'm feeling like a whore
I know this was my own fault too
The cost of loving you
So now when we are way past that
I hope you hate me too

Storm

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Published on Thursday, November 13, 2003. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Hate Me"

A former member wrote: Shit, emotions are sometimes way too taxing. Whoooa! good shit.
On Saturday, December 25, 2004, VenomPlease (134) wrote:

Awesome write. Couldn't have said it better....
On Wednesday, November 10, 2004, Nightwing (10) wrote:

wow, I really like this piece! a lot of emotion here ... great write!!
On Wednesday, September 1, 2004, lordshadow (153) wrote:

I liked this very very much.
A former member wrote: very good.very very good
A former member wrote: god..how simple thing called love can turn to hate...seems we can never hate another trully unless we once loved them...i will be reading more of your work..nicely done :)
On Friday, March 5, 2004, BoldSolitude (214) wrote:

"With every breath you open up a wound that will not heal" that says it all.
On Wednesday, November 19, 2003, OLd SouL (717) wrote:

very intense... you wish pain on that person in the same sense you feel. Your emotions were well delivered. your work is very good. :::OLd
On Friday, November 14, 2003, Dancing_Monkey (1228) wrote:

not bad at all... and I agree with urban, this is angerfull..
A former member wrote: Wow the anger in this was very intense. I like how you wrapped this up in the end with a subtle hint that if the person doesn't hate you after all of that you'll give them reason to. Well done.
On Thursday, November 13, 2003, finaldestiny (72) wrote:

heh i feel that way a lot too, it was kinda ironic, it's like I feel those things but never know how to say it, nice job~finaldestiny~
A former member wrote: Powerful,deep and sympathetic. For I have felt exactly like this and still do, its like you have written some of my feelings down for me. Excellent. Keep it up! xb.sx