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Hate Me
By Storm
If I could do one single thing
I'd erase you from my mind
There's nothing I wouldn't sacrifice
make me deaf, kill my sense, make me blind
But nothing is going to take away
this pain you make me feel
With every breath you open up a wound
that will not heal
With every fucking breath you take
I hate you even more
And while you go unbruised from this
I'm feeling like a whore
I know this was my own fault too
The cost of loving you
So now when we are way past that
I hope you hate me too
Storm
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Copyright 2003 Storm
Published on Thursday, November 13, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Hate Me"
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A former member wrote:
Shit, emotions are sometimes way too taxing. Whoooa! good shit.
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On Saturday, December 25, 2004, VenomPlease
(134)
wrote:
Awesome write. Couldn't have said it better....
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On Wednesday, November 10, 2004, Nightwing
(10) wrote:
wow, I really like this piece! a lot of emotion here ... great write!!
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On Wednesday, September 1, 2004, lordshadow
(153) wrote:
I liked this very very much.
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A former member wrote:
very good.very very good
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A former member wrote:
god..how simple thing called love can turn to hate...seems we can never hate another trully unless we once loved them...i will be reading more of your work..nicely done :)
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On Friday, March 5, 2004, BoldSolitude
(214) wrote:
"With every breath you open up a wound that will not heal" that says it all.
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On Wednesday, November 19, 2003, OLd SouL
(734) wrote:
very intense... you wish pain on that person in the same sense you feel. Your emotions were well delivered. your work is very good. :::OLd
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On Friday, November 14, 2003, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
not bad at all... and I agree with urban, this is angerfull..
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A former member wrote:
Wow the anger in this was very intense. I like how you wrapped this up in the end with a subtle hint that if the person doesn't hate you after all of that you'll give them reason to. Well done.
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On Thursday, November 13, 2003, finaldestiny
(74) wrote:
heh i feel that way a lot too, it was kinda ironic, it's like I feel those things but never know how to say it, nice job~finaldestiny~
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A former member wrote:
Powerful,deep and sympathetic. For I have felt exactly like this and still do, its like you have written some of my feelings down for me. Excellent. Keep it up! xb.sx
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