Skulptur av Is

By Storm

Eons of time you stood there
Peering into the black
Pleading to see more
Than your reflection staring back

Do you remember the future
That poured out of your grip
Or the acid salt water
That never ceased to drip

Teardrops of liquid nitrogen
Flooding your well
Hiding from you what
Now only suncats can tell

Did the fangs of bitterness
Sink too deep into your mind
That you denied whatever
Truth you sought to find

What caused you to stay
When your tears escaped
To drench your world
And leave it; frostraped

Was it a glimpse
Of a memory, lost
That made you linger
In hybernation, covered in frost

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Copyright 2004 Storm
Published on Sunday, November 28, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Deadlights On Sunday, August 25, 2013, Deadlights (28)By person wrote:

    Holy shit this is awesome, great work.

  • AniDayz On Tuesday, December 21, 2004, AniDayz (820)By person wrote:

    incredible. very well done

  • island warrior On Sunday, December 19, 2004, island warrior (210)By person wrote:

    Awesome write.

  • Omalleyjr On Wednesday, December 1, 2004, Omalleyjr (22)By person wrote:

    deep, quite deep i loved it

  • BeautifulCalamity On Sunday, November 28, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (428)By person wrote:

    last two lines were perfect. wonderful write..

  • A former member wrote: You are such an amazing writer

  • Solace On Sunday, November 28, 2004, Solace (1069)By person wrote:

    This is impeccable...A truly beautiful wistful feel to it that pervades uncannily..."you denied whatever truth you sought to find" Vacker...

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