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"Yes, but some people have their mind shattered and they can't connect all the pieces together, so all they get is a "Gibberish voices disconnected from logic". Thanks for the compliment"
Posted by Melancholic VIncent on "Fallacious Reality " by Melancholic VIncent

"We all create our own realities to function inside of, perhaps as a coping mechanism, and this piece was exquisite, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Fallacious Reality " by Melancholic VIncent

"If we carve things in rock they'll remain there forever. I am sorry if the poem is a little hard to understand. Your comments are always welcome Dan"
Posted by Melancholic VIncent on "Prologue" by Melancholic VIncent

"The rocks do remember, a challenging read but we need that on occasion, especially when the payoff was worth it, thanks Mel."
Posted by dwells on "Prologue" by Melancholic VIncent

"Thanks so much. I'm glad you felt connected with it. When i did this, i wanted so bad to write something, but I was in lack of inspiration, I didn't think about a theme, I just kept writing. "
Posted by Melancholic VIncent on "Fallacious Reality " by Melancholic VIncent

"These lines captured me "Ideas possess me I can see they are not mine Maybe from another department Of my shattered mind I am bound by their will" Love this, I feel this way often, first time I saw it expressed so accurately. Your a very strong poet. "
Posted by TornPieces on "Fallacious Reality " by Melancholic VIncent

"Thanks, it's something simple but it illustrated well what i want to pass through"
Posted by Melancholic VIncent on "The Nightmare of Schizophrenia" by Melancholic VIncent

"this was an awesome read. i really felt connected to it."
Posted by LostInDarkness on "The Nightmare of Schizophrenia" by Melancholic VIncent

"Love the old school sound, a nice tribute to an awesome character, much enjoyed - XXOO"
Posted by Nehema on "Before the night is over (Tribute to Max Payne)" by Melancholic VIncent

"Then we have that in common. Hope you managed to cope with that hell. Even if we don't want to, we end up knowing the disease even if it's just a familiar that has it... Thanks for your support."
Posted by Melancholic VIncent on "The Nightmare of Schizophrenia" by Melancholic VIncent

"This runs in my family - very accurate description, thanks for sharing, much enjoyed - XXOO"
Posted by Nehema on "The Nightmare of Schizophrenia" by Melancholic VIncent

"ep, someone must get loss with all the confusion, with all the extra identities... Last time i talked to my mom, she said she was a psychiatrist that studied in Cambridge, although she never even been there... These people, they create all these hypothetical situations which are not hypothetical to them and live a hundred different lives all at once, and maybe the brain can't take it... i could go on trying to describe this, but in the end, it doesn't even matter... I can't fix it... "
Posted by Melancholic VIncent on "The Nightmare of Schizophrenia" by Melancholic VIncent

"This is a perfect description of this.. very much so.. hello there you ."
Posted by Devilish on "The Nightmare of Schizophrenia" by Melancholic VIncent

"Thanks dwells, i really enjoy your comments. I took your advice :) Cheers!"
Posted by Melancholic VIncent on "The Nightmare of Schizophrenia" by Melancholic VIncent

"Very well done Mel and some fine contrasting and conflicting lines here. You might want to change "was a sane" to "was a bane" maybe? Cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "The Nightmare of Schizophrenia" by Melancholic VIncent

"When I wrote this, i was staring at the ceiling in my bed, inspired by the darkness and silence that surrounded me. So you know Portuguese? "
Posted by Melancholic VIncent on "The Night Coat" by Melancholic VIncent

"I enjoyed this dark reverie wrapped in the cloak of night... if Portuguese is your native tongue you have some talent, you seem able to write easily in both languages ... thank you"
Posted by kinkifrog on "The Night Coat" by Melancholic VIncent

"Yes indeed, people seek money to feel rich on the inside, but maybe the can feel rich with so less, because they are poor-minded. Thanks for your comment and contribution "
Posted by Melancholic VIncent on "Next of Kin" by Melancholic VIncent

"I am looking forward to comment other people work, sometimes i get a little lazy, i guess. Thank you for your admiration."
Posted by Melancholic VIncent on "Before the night is over (Tribute to Max Payne)" by Melancholic VIncent

"This made me wanna touch myself in the most beautiful ways.. deliver me a piece of perfection and i will feel it.. if you commented more you would have more reads for your work deserves it ."
Posted by Devilish on "Before the night is over (Tribute to Max Payne)" by Melancholic VIncent

"I'm better at english, a little of german and spanish. I like the american spanish very much, it's diferent. I would like to study all kinds of languages, but i live in a small town with not much resources. "
Posted by Melancholic VIncent on "Lacerating Rage" by Melancholic VIncent

"I really appreciated your comment. Keep up with your comments"
Posted by Melancholic VIncent on "My dire diary" by Melancholic VIncent

"I had Spanish all 4 years in Hialeah High School, it was a survival skill in Miami, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Lacerating Rage" by Melancholic VIncent

"i enjoyed this, the parallelism and the repetition really added to the experience. this gave me a sense of urgency"
Posted by spikedwithLUST on "My dire diary" by Melancholic VIncent

"Thank you for your comment. The line you mentioned to fully understand you must incluide the rest, the message there is these soldiers (kamikaze air plane soldiers) are full of bones as any other human, devotion because they are a spiritual people and bombs on the rear because they are suicide bombers. But feel free to express your thoughts about any of my work, opinions are always welcome :)"
Posted by Melancholic VIncent on "The Great War" by Melancholic VIncent

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