Comments by All Members
- "I understand how you feel... I know its hard to have to live with something like this, especially since, there basically is no one to blame. Its just an inevitable and irreversible downward spiral, no escape whatsoever, and that really fucks up the whole thing....its a terrible thing to live with. I like the way you related your mother to a machine...running and working, but no soul, no life. Deteriotated completely. But one thing...no matter how you feel, you are not an abomination my sweet big brother, youll never be :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Motherless Abomination" by Melancholic VIncent
- "Yeah...we all get punished when we do bad, bad stuff...half humanity could go to Hell/Hades/Gehenna/[INSERT RELIGION]. your imagery on this one was...different from what I'm used to from you...nonetheless i love it. you pull it off well"
Posted by Unknown on "Crimson Blood" by Melancholic VIncent
- "You showed me this one earlier... i feel again that i have to say just how incredibly this is written. Every detail of the battlefield and its deranging effects coming to its full glory...or disglory.. I loved its depth and its obvious that alot of effort has been put in writing this"
Posted by Unknown on "The Great War" by Melancholic VIncent
- "Through knowing you and your pain i can understand and feel every single word in this poem. In some way you could see this as a synopsis of your past.. nonetheless, the pain has not been cut short in the process. You brought it out beautifully, and your bitter melancholy strikes me......
And.. 'the greenish in your eyes'? That's cute ^^"
Posted by Unknown on "Next of Kin" by Melancholic VIncent
- "Yeah, i know I'm generally a crybaby, but not over poetry. And honestly, this made me shed a few tears. I dont know your brother, nor did i see his death, but ever since you told me about the accident and about his death, I have felt incredibly sad for him. I don't know. maybe its because I have this sympathy for you that i feel some of it towards him as well... *takes a deep breath* im okay.
Condolences to your brother.."
Posted by Unknown on "Where art thou my brother?" by Melancholic VIncent
- "It sounds so cool and creepy and every time i read this i want to write a kinda 'cyber'-like poem too but i goddamn don't know how! >.< anyways, you do know that i love this poem lots and lots and lots :3 I enjoy how that tension builds up more and more and then, suddenly, dead."
Posted by Unknown on "System Overload" by Melancholic VIncent
- "It's a beautiful piece and a true philosophy. we do change, and we cant go back as we are forcefully pushed forward by the wall of time, relentlessly, no warning signs, just straight into the deep. Great, great write :) you deserve a biscuit *"
Posted by Unknown on "Metamorphosis" by Melancholic VIncent
- "Friggin' fucking awesome. I enjoyed how at many points the tension builds up and then slides down, going up a second time, sliding down again. and directly relating cold feelings, death and pain to characteristics of the bullet...very enjoyable read ^^"
Posted by Unknown on "Single-Bullet Theory" by Melancholic VIncent
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