Comments by All Members
- "This is a whole new level of amazingness. And the last 4 lines were absolute perfection. I should write poems in the kitchen more often and hope they turn out like this..."
Posted by Dreaming in Stanzas on "comfort food" by King_Crazy_Dave
- "Something about this turned my stomach as well. It made me think of broken families and small towns and tornadoes and weeping in bathroom stalls. Now that I say that, I'm reminded of the movie Gummo (a screwed up indie flick with disturbing storylines and spanish metal). I am simultaneously intrigued and off put by the stream of feelings and images this evoked. Interesting work. Thank you for sharing. "
Posted by inhisbelly on "I met my mom at arbys" by King_Crazy_Dave
- "Quantum physical. Love just exists, we don't make it, we catch it, and this is like a meteor shower of pulse and catch, the oxygen doesn't reach here. Transcend. Much respect."
Posted by Amaryllis on "constellations touch" by King_Crazy_Dave
- "brilliant. this is my favorite of the parodies... it feels like looking up at a glow in the dark ceiling and stealing a dream from the planets posters..im stoned but I could say this rides like a midnight jaguar ,,,online dating haven't tried it? maybe goes well as this poem does as grape on the jelly toast.. or buttery roast! sweeeeeet,, "
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "constellations touch" by King_Crazy_Dave
- "haha, nice... I liked that end, neologism explosion... taking control of the letters and makin them bend and beg. this was a fun read, had rhythm, speed... a fun progression that played the words like lips under a finger tip strum.... maybe. well done, most enjoyed. I could ride this read *bows*"
Posted by The Dybbuk on "constellations touch" by King_Crazy_Dave
- "what a rare thing , erotica that works ... a careful balance of well chosen, rather alluring metaphors that make scientific and sensual sense... (without being bludgeoned over the head with crass imagery)... yea ... "
Posted by kinkifrog on "constellations touch" by King_Crazy_Dave
- "i love the closing lines in particular, that final thrust. steamy and intergalactic orgasmic phantastic, pressing that threshold of love, time, space, travel. no dimension can keep or refuse you, bro. you tear through barriers like they're plastic wrap all like WHAT BITCH. kinda like the dude in slaughter-house five but you're in control. das my bro-mo' fa sho, yo."
Posted by Unknown on "constellations touch" by King_Crazy_Dave
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