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- "This is an interesting tale. I would say check your grammar in this. The errors sort of throw the flow
of an otherwise solid write"
Posted by spikedwithLUST on "demonology " by Little_Zombie
- "hi there li'l zombie ... I get your message , it's a strong statement... just check line 7 though, did you mean 'insult your insults' ... thought I like the word 'insluts' sort of like the sleazy in-crowd ? ... :P"
Posted by kinkifrog on "I WON'T bAcK DoWn" by Little_Zombie
- "Lost time is like lost money, you can never get it back, or so they say, good luck with Father Time!"
Posted by dwells on "TIme Fled" by Little_Zombie
- "Been there too, sitting in a bar and watching myself in the mirror. This was a very sorrowful piece that speaks of the past in tones of remorse and loss perhaps, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Fast F O R W A R D" by Little_Zombie
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