Comments by All Members
- "It flows well. I love the overall subject of the poem, and how the thought of suicide is thought of in a sort of lyrical way. "
Posted by Unknown on "From a bottle" by lockupthedoors
- "A very deep poem sorry for my lateness I acutaully forgotten that I have an account and had struggle getting in. Thanks for you comment on In the unknown :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Losing at Winning" by lockupthedoors
- "Don't be in such a hurry, even if your friends are telling magical stories, because that is what they are. You are at the age of experimentation and the real you needs a chance to surface, so take it slow and easy. The ocean is wide with many fish inside, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "For him, My Ignorant Love" by lockupthedoors
- "Mommy doesn't like it but she doesn't know what to do either. The only time she's ever had to support people single-handedly was herself in college"
Posted by lockupthedoors on "Dear Daddy," by lockupthedoors
- "What does Mommy have to say about all of this, or are we hearing her through you perhaps? Sorry you're so down, cheers and hope this was cathartic too."
Posted by dwells on "Dear Daddy," by lockupthedoors
- "Wow LUTD, the stuff is coming fast and furious. Try pacing things out a bit and you'll get more comments on your works. Also, roam around and comment on others - no special skills required, just be constructive. Thanks and welcome again!"
Posted by dwells on "The Memories are Coming" by lockupthedoors
- "Hi LUTD - last line of first stanza should end in "finality" maybe?. This was darkly driven and approaching some kind of cataclysm, perhaps apocalyptic? Much enjoyed, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Blackbirds" by lockupthedoors
- "The last line was a bit of a contradiction perhaps? Hard to keep first and third person lines straight sometimes. This was finely cratfted at first and then seems maybe rushed at the ending, or to say another way, not so convincing point of view after setting the stage. Don't mean to be too critical but you do have talent and the overall piece was quite worthwhile and nicely done. Welcome to DP again I think, and cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Ballad for the Strong Ones" by lockupthedoors
- "Some comments that do not follow the TOS have been deleted from this work. Commenters that have questions about this policy may read so here: http://www.darkpoetry.com/node/doc/tos . In general hate speech and personal attacks are not allowed here on DarkPoetry.com. If any members have further questions please ask one of the council members. This action has been logged."
Posted by Adam on "Her Majesty: The Demon" by lockupthedoors
- "No problem, you can click "edit" in the top R.H. and fix it anytime you are logged-in.
Enjoyed this piece very much, gothic and spiteful yet forlornly lonely perhaps. Thanks and welcome again!"
Posted by dwells on "Her Majesty: The Demon" by lockupthedoors
[Next]
