From a bottle

By lockupthedoors

 Soon the song turns soft and grey
Lyrics slowly fade away

Lives we love all one day end
Someday I will leave, my friend

In our lives our friendships linked
but hiding, there's more than you think

The dying girl dress stained in blood
washed away in deep flash flood.

In darkness, the girl's last tear falls
FOREVER scrawled in blood on walls

softly apparitions dance
mourning bloody last romance

Fallen stars burn up in space
Don't wish on them, it's all a waste

Just balls of gas in atmosphere
All stars fall, our ending's near

Fly away, be free at last
escaping deadly shadows cast

All I feel in words written:
Does suicide count as a sin?

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Copyright 2012 lockupthedoors
Published on Sunday, December 2, 2012.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: It flows well. I love the overall subject of the poem, and how the thought of suicide is thought of in a sort of lyrical way.

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