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- "I'm glad it was able to help you. What you said is basically what I did. I had a small bout of being overwhelmed by some memories and I just started writing. Wasn't sure how it would turn out but I just kept going."
Posted by Deviated09 on "My admission. My soul." by Deviated09
- "Thank you! I would share more of my work but I'm very busy lately taking care of work/family/business/etc and rarely get to be on here anymore.. I hope you enjoyed the material! I'm happy to share what I can to the world."
Posted by Deviated09 on "My writing just is." by Deviated09
- "you are really a great writerr! Ive read alot of your pieces on here & you remind me of my favorite poet, very hurt in life but you give alot in your writing."
Posted by poe_lover28 on "My writing just is." by Deviated09
- "this really helped me alot i have recently made some very bad mistakes in my life and am trying to rebuild myself, i am trying to be positive and lock in my bad emotions but sometimes my old self leaks out alot, i have a had a somewhat rough life so far & recently gave up alot of people in my life that i was close to, im so glad i found this. thank you for writing this, you obviously have lots of life experiance, more than i but my advice is when you feel your bad emotions or your inner evil leaking out.. alwayspick up a pen and write spmething down or post it on here because someone is going to read it..and its going to help someone"
Posted by poe_lover28 on "My admission. My soul." by Deviated09
- "Aw, Beautiful... "The way we could fight and always still love each other." Yeah- I can relate to this with my sisters. Thanks for this read. I can heavily relate. :)"
Posted by Symbol on "Here's to you." by Deviated09
- "Thanks for the criticism and advice :-) that was just the rough write, I didn't do any editing except for a duplicated sentence I missed.. it was a random spurt of inspiration I had to write(these insanely long work weeks and classes have me too exhausted to be inspirational anymore)"
Posted by Deviated09 on "Love's strongest hold." by Deviated09
- "I'd recommend a less-cliche final stanza to bring the whole thing home, and the beginning took a while to gain steam, but I really enjoyed the middle... there definitely is a more introspective side as the poem goes along... overall, good work. :)"
Posted by Shadow Colossus on "Love's strongest hold." by Deviated09
- "Thank you very much =]
I love old English and Gaelic, but there are so very few people that even know what they are, let alone appreciate them.."
Posted by Deviated09 on "Eternally" by Deviated09
- "I really like your words and yes, like Undertaker said, it's an old traditional english, which really catches my attention"
Posted by Unknown on "Eternally" by Deviated09
- "I do enjoy a poet that likes to write in a older sort of language. Words most have seem to forgot. A heart that yearns, decided by the elders. This seems to be a very old tradition of how one's love was chose. Her heart meant to be taken by yours. A beautiful poem indeed, I enjoy your deep images. Together forever you shall live. Great write my friend."
Posted by Undertaker on "Eternally" by Deviated09
- "we need some modern day robin hoods to help out, but your empathy is a step in the right direction . "
Posted by natalie on "Our reality." by Deviated09
- "No one here gets out alive the doors ´sang. I like this poem, it is a shout out to the horrible world we live Ãn. I´m glad you reach out a hand to those who need it and ignore the rich. "
Posted by Unknown on "Our reality." by Deviated09
- "All truth. All things I have lived through, toned down to be publicly acceptable. I just need people to realize the greatest monsters in this world are some of the people we look the highest upon.. Fathers, priests, police, medics, hospitals, churches.. These are the weights I bare in life, the curse of seeing so many of these bastardized monsters living in normal society, getting nothing but respect, while others suffer greatly from it and get cast aside when trying to bring the truth to the surface."
Posted by Deviated09 on "Untitled" by Deviated09
- "Noted, and thank you for the input =] It's my joy to share some of my talent(how ever much practice I still need with it lol)"
Posted by Deviated09 on "The New Breed" by Deviated09
- "Not sure "My howl easily resounds in the distance" is quite right. I know what you meen but it's almost like you can hera an aecho, matter of fact "My howl echoes in the distance" might be preferred? Or not, no biggie. This was quite the solemn and introspective piece and thanks for sharing."
Posted by dwells on "The New Breed" by Deviated09
- "I like this I Have a great deal of respect for good fathers, I. Didn't have one and I always wondered how different I would have been if I did or maybe not at all, very good writing sounds very sacred. "
Posted by Corinthian on "The Father's Lullaby" by Deviated09
- "Very well done but wondering how you can be so sure that you'll get what you want in another state? Sounds quite desperate and final for one so young I'd guess. Good effort here, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "The tears of time." by Deviated09
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