Comments by All Members
- "The seedless part sounded enticing for sure. This was great and so well done, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Eos" by Polaris
- "Eos, goddess of the dawn of the vedic texts. beautiful choice for your comparison.... a failed love perhaps? Regardless, i love re-interpretative use of mythology. Kudos!!"
Posted by Unknown on "Eos" by Polaris
- "Good work...almost abit of fantasy? Good job. "
Posted by Unknown on "Eos" by Polaris
- "This went from feeling sorry for yourself, into a righteous rage-filled rant, well done and much enjoyed, thanks!"
Posted by dwells on "The Great Tempter" by Polaris
- "An evil tempter, indeed. The begining starts off with such trust, such belief in the Tempter, you almost immediately give yourself over to him. But then as the poem unfolds, you see the real demon behind the mans face. Astounding visuals here. I especally like the last stanza. It leaves one with an almost haunting feeling. A seductive fear, if you will. Brava! Excellent job."
Posted by Ladyhawke on "The Great Tempter" by Polaris
- "...the stuff that nightmares are made of (to paraphrase Shakespeare)...illuminated w/a blacklight..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "Reckoning" by Polaris
- "Blast OFF! Let's go into the wild blue yonder (and beyond). Too bad O discontinued the space program. This was great, thanks and book me for the next flight to Betelguese, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Take Me With You" by Polaris
- "Hit me like a submarine-fired ICBM to destroy the North Star (HA)! So good to find a kindred spirit since I have a degree in zoology, but never used it much. Cheers to you!"
Posted by dwells on "14 Billion Years Ago..." by Polaris
- "Indeed, keep moving because the vultures are circling above, and they do hunger (for us all) - good one, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Reckoning" by Polaris
- "And this was your first poem ever written? I bow to you sir. This was a magnificent piece. Chaotic, yet a sense of some order. Puts the readers mind right there, in the heart of the poem itself. I am humbled and awed by this piece. *bows*"
Posted by Ladyhawke on "Resolve" by Polaris
- "Really great poem! I love the rhyming scheme. Keep up the good work."
Posted by DarkAsh on "Selene" by Polaris
- "I absolutely adore mythology and this was an excellent write. It was very mythcal and enchanting in the way you've so perfectly described everything. It truly was captivating. Thank you for recommending this piece. I am so glad I got a chance to find it. This is one true piece of art. Brava!!"
Posted by Ladyhawke on "Selene" by Polaris
- "When do the meek inherit? Thanks for this political offering and enjoyed the experience, well done."
Posted by dwells on "A Wasted Chance" by Polaris
- "the cycle of extinction and rebirth. a recurring theme across the history of time on this planet. thank you for your thoughts on this."
Posted by Patches on "A Wasted Chance" by Polaris
- "Thank you. And thanks for pointing that out. I had forgot to fix it before submitting it."
Posted by Polaris on "Selene" by Polaris
- "Well done P. and truly captivating in it's acutely accurate brevity (says a lot with little). Oh, and perhaps "catatonic" maybe? Not sure...Thanks !"
Posted by dwells on "Selene" by Polaris
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