Comments by All Members
- "At this rate, I'm going to run out of superlatives and ways to comment on your works and end up repeating myself. The clarity with which you present the truth is what marks you out, I think."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Fecundity" by cadymae
- "I would disagree and say the last line works somehow...Something about pairing sating with gladness brought images of satsumas in the blazing summer sun for me. And the way that offset the rest of the piece...BOOM! :)"
Posted by carlosjackal on "Yet I'll still regret" by cadymae
- "A piece worth its weight in gold..Any thoughts that resonate whether or not it seems good at the time, I try to note down quickly before the ether comes and makes them disappear."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Perfectly Imperfect" by cadymae
- "Soothing piece for the soul...Wonderful fragments of hope and flotsam..I could drift all day.."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Flotsam" by cadymae
- "I sometimes wonder if I knew then what I know now ... I'm not sure that would have helped...is fore-warned fore-armed or maybe completely crushing...your created language is masterful , much conveyed with such poetic precision"
Posted by kinkifrog on "Hatchet-shaped hole in a heart-shaped world" by cadymae
- "For some reason, I was imagining the strangest, most intriguing and unique yet also affectionate rescue cat known to man. Until I realised that smoke and hairless arms do not make a good cat."
Posted by carlosjackal on "pulsing affinities" by cadymae
- "Your writing is like Bukowski's in that it's poetic weight can bring angels crashing to earth with it's hard-hitting truths. Yet there's also something uplifting about your works in their eloquence. "
Posted by carlosjackal on "The bondification of affection" by cadymae
- "The way so much is left to the imagination....Unflinching piece that causes the reader to flinch by the end without even being entirely sure of the true extent of what is implied here. "
Posted by carlosjackal on "Hate eats life" by cadymae
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