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  • "What I wouldn't give to hear these words... Damn. Excellent write. You captured the moment so perfectly. God, makes me want to call up my guy, hop in the car and head south for the beach. Kudos to you man. *tips hat*"
    Posted by Ladyhawke on "Let's go away" by AllenTaylor
  • "Powerful words. God, every blow to this, I felt. The last couple of lines, "Im trying to convince myself that I'm through adoring you", yes, I know how that feels. Knowing that you should hate this person, wash your hands of them, never look back at them....but finding that you can't seem to let them go. LIke a moth to the flame. Great write. *hugs*"
    Posted by Ladyhawke on "Your Spell" by AllenTaylor
  • "This is so familiar. Playing second-fiddle doesn't do any good for your heart. It hurts to see this happen. I am sorry this happened to you. So much for saying "I love you" every day, huh?"
    Posted by Ladyhawke on "What am I to you?" by AllenTaylor
  • "True Soul's Desire. Gorgeous. Complete longing & heart ache. Love this. Keep her, keep this."
    Posted by Unknown on "The Lover" by AllenTaylor
  • "Love the ending especially. Very descriptive. Had a smile on my face while reading. Job well done :) "
    Posted by Unknown on "Let's go away" by AllenTaylor
  • "This is gorgeous! I'd love to harmonize it with you some time. You are an amazing & profound artist. Great!"
    Posted by Unknown on "Time Flies" by AllenTaylor
  • "Wow. I am sorry Allen that anyone has to feel this way. There is nothing worse then being used by the one's you love. It kills all hope. Many hugs for you..."
    Posted by Unknown on "What am I to you?" by AllenTaylor
  • "Damn! I felt your pain on this one Allen! It came through raw and bloody. Excellent poem. Thank you for sharing!"
    Posted by Unknown on "Your Spell" by AllenTaylor
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