Comments by All Members
- "This was a very intense description of nothing. Not in the sense of substance but that you managed to keep secret exactly what IT is. Great old write"
Posted by Spiral Downward on "addictive Death" by kissofdeath
- "Very chilling, good poem. I could see the pictures that you created as I read it. I think they could make a movie about this ha ha it would make a good thriller."
Posted by Unknown on "smoke rings in the dark" by kissofdeath
- "Honest to god this brought a tear out of my eye. You are a very strong person and I admire you for that. Great poem... And please keep writing"
Posted by Unknown on "mommy dearest" by kissofdeath
- ""Time is but the stream I go a-fishing in." (At least that's what Thoreau said.) I really hate the way time can destroy a person or an activity. It's sort of a curse and a blessing all at once. Interesting write."
Posted by CorruptedLittleGirl on "just a matter of time" by kissofdeath
- "This is a nice concept. I love the dark seductiveness.. But a couple of the lines don't quite fit well and I found myself stumbling a bit. nice work, though. :)"
Posted by Bluegirl on "mrs. devine's need" by kissofdeath
- "Like the eye of the tiger you were my nightingale? What the hell is that? And otherwise, this pieces is so generic that it should be sold in convenience stores. If you'd actually kill yourself over someone not being with you, then you deserve whatever com"
Posted by Six-Out on "utter anguish for love" by kissofdeath
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