utter anguish for love

By kissofdeath

I sit in my chamber, my black heart caving in.
Today's our anniversary But without you, it is thin .
How do I make you love me, how can you see?
Like Romeo and Juliet, death may have to be.
The answers to my riddles so plain and absured.
I torture myself day and night trying to find the words.
Like the ey e of the tiger you were my nightingale.
Alone is something I dont want , I dont invite it , I am too frail.
For if my heart should break again, who is there to re-mend?
My thoughts now days are dark, and my stride so weak at heart, dust for tears, anguish for pain, like a prisoner without a way. Without hope, without fear, without you, my death is near.....








For Michael Osborne.

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Copyright 2004 kissofdeath
Published on Friday, January 23, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Six-Out On Sunday, August 21, 2005, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    Like the eye of the tiger you were my nightingale? What the hell is that? And otherwise, this pieces is so generic that it should be sold in convenience stores. If you'd actually kill yourself over someone not being with you, then you deserve whatever com

  • Six-Out On Sunday, August 21, 2005, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    *comes after your death, and hopefully it's very painful.

  • Spiritus_Frumenti On Friday, January 23, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti (340)By person wrote:

    this wasn't a bad poem at all....very sweet but it lacked structure...that would have changed the entire dynamics of this piece...also, you have great cleavage...-l-

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