My death revenge to you
By kissofdeath
There's nothing left to say
There;s nothing more tonight.
I have said my last words, and had my last fights
To busy to see, to busy to sit, you always sayingI dont have time for
your bullshit.
What you dont know is as your at work,
My minds lays heavy with death in a twirk.
Im not sad or even upset
Leaving you, is not threat.
But this time Im ready to say farwell
You wont even hear it as I ring my final bell.
Your going to cry and ask why, but soon you'll come to realize, all this
bullshit you have no time,
and soon you too will meet your demise.
I'm not going to hesitate or question myself
Im not putting it back on the shelf.
The floor wont splatter as I push out the pain
I've made sure you can still live here in vein.
I'm dressed for the coroner for the sheriff and all, they wont think this
bullshit is small.
I take one last smile and began to breath
Put my hand to the trigger and plunge with a squeeze,
My knees are weak Yep, here I go
Its almost like high, a final one though
I can feel the beat within every inch. sounds like clapping only dying
with every pinch.
My blood is quick to coat my throat its pouring out from under, in and
out my throat.
My hair is all red, its looks nice, my breast are splattered with red
ice, Im getting cold, my blinks are rough, I take my last final cough,
I hope your happy with what you find, maybe it wont be bullshit this time.
Awards
Comments on "My death revenge to you"
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On Tuesday, September 25, 2012, Ortolan
(214) wrote:
That's brutal.
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A former member wrote:
Wow, I don't think I've ever been so captured by a poem before. Great work
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On Wednesday, October 22, 2003, OLd SouL
(717) wrote:
*shivers* what one thinks as inconsequential can mean so much to another person. And when the shit builds the effects are 10 times more impactful. Wicked write.
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On Monday, October 20, 2003, Johny_D_Lewis
(467) wrote:
much
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On Monday, October 20, 2003, Johny_D_Lewis
(467) wrote:
this gave me chills...i never give that nuch bullshit
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On Friday, October 17, 2003, WinterGrave
(258) wrote:
wow, powerful i should say, gave me the chills reading it. Vary well writen, worthy of a secound read (or3rd).~~~Grave