mrs. devine's need
By kissofdeath
No words can describe the beauty in her face,
Her body moves with every touch of grace
She talks to no one and pays them no mind
This is a woman, Ms. Devine.
She cuts with her eyes and slashes you with words
her night life is hungry some call her disturbed
The men all wish for a word or a voice,
she's a mystery to them they have no choice,
If she's around and the price is right, you can have her for just one
night.
Then she'll be gone, Like a bird in flight, looking for someone else and
their craves of delight.
But this isn't all, she's vicious with fright,
It gets her off to cut you with knives.
She'll fuck you and beat and pull it between her breast,
but then its your turn to return her best.
She'll let you hit it, and tease it while you bleed,
you have no idea, all your fullfilling is a need.
so is she my ms. Devine
sh'es fullfilling her body and soul, & mind.
So when you look and stare and wish for a piece just remember she also
has needs.
*KISS
Comments on "mrs. devine's need"
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On Thursday, September 28, 2006, Bluegirl
(177) wrote:
This is a nice concept. I love the dark seductiveness.. But a couple of the lines don't quite fit well and I found myself stumbling a bit. nice work, though. :)
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On Wednesday, May 4, 2005, Kinkypoptart
(555) wrote:
Very nicely done. ~*~Tart~*~
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A former member wrote:
the rhyming is inconsistant at some parts, but besides that, its good!
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On Wednesday, October 22, 2003, OLd SouL
(717) wrote:
evil and seductive. ahh, the price to fulfill your desires... amusing read
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On Saturday, October 18, 2003, SilentStalker
(1047) wrote:
...nicely done...dark and delicious...I very much enjoyed this... -Darun