Comments by All Members
- "And of what sterner stuff are your wings made? This was spell-binding and superbly expressed as only you can do, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Paper Wings" by With love_Crow
- "this brought to my mind people who live a lie, not because they want to, but because they honestly want to believe it to be true. here's to either realizing that dream is simply not possible, or overcoming their personal obstacles to achieve said dream. either way, it's a win win situation."
Posted by Patches on "Paper Wings" by With love_Crow
- "It's funny because I have been thinking about writing a similar poem called Paper Tiger but you did this one so beautifully I wont kick around my idea anymore. I was really feeling this."
Posted by Alchemist on "Paper Wings" by With love_Crow
- "Is It Bad I Could Hear This Being Screamed Over Some Heavy Riffs? I Like The Singsongy, Yet Ever So Down Tempo Of This... Great Writing. Ill Be Reading More Of Your Works :D"
Posted by Chaos God on "Souless" by With love_Crow
- "Much better way to go in the long run I'm sure. What powers of description you posess, well done, too real, and a cool simile too!"
Posted by dwells on "Gallows " by With love_Crow
- "I love how well this poem flowed.........it kept me on edge......im glad the verses won its the best way :) cause you write so beautifully"
Posted by rosemaiden on "Gallows " by With love_Crow
- "I love it.. What don't you write that i don't love.. you speak from your heart.. Its always a beautiful thing to read some one that does. Hello there you."
Posted by Devilish on "I've burnt the Cycle " by With love_Crow
- "I thought at first you burned the motorcycle, but then got into the flow and much enjoyed the descriptive phraseology as your poignant goodbye developed and explained. "promise better, give them worse" was memorable to be sure, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "I've burnt the Cycle " by With love_Crow
- "This has got to be a masterful "Dear John" letter, because that's what it sounds like. The oceanic simile was well applied and developed too, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Shores of Genesis " by With love_Crow
- "Are we still perfect?
Not in my eyes
And from staring in yours
We're on the same page
Of this tragic novel
Priceless my love!! Hello there you.. Another beauty from that mind of yours... =)~"
Posted by Devilish on "Shores of Genesis " by With love_Crow
- "I like the image of vanity... the lipstick on the glass (or, at least, that's how I read that line) but I think 'stains' requires 'are' in that line. Danger in the distance, isn't every pretty face a siren sounding the doom of someone in the distance? Very nicely written, rainbow judgments, hehe... I wonder if it is not hypocritical to deny that we judge? or to judge all judgments in one way or another... a fun read, thanks. "
Posted by The Dybbuk on "Commercial Shade" by With love_Crow
- "Impressive and very intense! One can feel the passion that went into this write in every line! I look forward to reading more of your poems!"
Posted by Unknown on "Commercial Shade" by With love_Crow
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