Comments by All Members
- "nicely done! love the constant search for answers...it gives the 'shadow' substance. thanks for sharing."
Posted by natalie on "Shadow" by With love_Crow
- "an awesome landscape of words! blue is a colour that has so many shades, so much allure. thank you for this lovely write.
i just noticed, in the last stanza, last line, 'behind windowless planes of the mask that you 'had' drew' that you drew would better fit...hope you don't mind me pointing that out."
Posted by natalie on "Paint you...Blue" by With love_Crow
- "Once the monster has you in its grasp it waxes and wanes in a rhythm unknown perhaps. For example the title means "I adore your heiny" in English (HA!) - one of your best, seriously WLC, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "J'adore ta haine" by With love_Crow
- "Beauty is in the eye of the beholder.. You painted soulful poetry from an everyday scene, nicely done.. could use some dreamless slumber right about now XD"
Posted by whisperingwalls on "Soulful Window" by With love_Crow
- "You gave love so many different faces and forms in this piece. It comes across as a double-edged blade, what can bring us the most pleasure can also cause us the most pain; The heart tends to amplify things in such a way. it also helped me sort through some thoughts, great write."
Posted by whisperingwalls on "Cupids Game" by With love_Crow
- "Hehe, very funny how very complicated lust can be neh? Great rhyme on this and I love how the words were chosen to create the hands image. Nice!"
Posted by Unknown on "Cupids Game" by With love_Crow
- "Playing this game is ninety nine percent of the fun, even if it has to end in some defined outcome, at least we spent out time wisely by trying, rather than by spectating.. wonderful poem Crow"
Posted by Skye on "Cupids Game" by With love_Crow
- "That just about covers it I'd guess, sometime you win and then there are those other times. The game of life perhaps, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Cupids Game" by With love_Crow
- "it *keeps* us close... I liked the first two lines most. Sounds like a charade, this game. gotta pay to play? interesting rhyme scheme, and fairly measured lines, well crafted overall, interlaced with insight and a weathered perspective, maybe. The contest between love and reason... an unending bout.... so many rounds. could be a game worth winning? I think being beaten by love would be a prize worth losing for. heh. thanks, a thoughtful read."
Posted by The Dybbuk on "Cupids Game" by With love_Crow
- "I like your style and I agree with the sentiment, especially the fourth stanza. It is an enjoyable task though. Thanks for sharing, much enjoyed - XXOO"
Posted by Nehema on "Cupids Game" by With love_Crow
- "thank you for sharing this....i'm glad i'm the first one to comment because...."i await the breaking of gray tides for infinity to become individual numbers".....so powerfully potent to fall into that line in particular.....however...(holy) this is a magnificently beautiful picture you have created.....i truly like this....rc/\ol"
Posted by Unknown on "Soulful Window" by With love_Crow
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