Comments by All Members
- "In one of my poems I wrote about slipping in between one's thoughts and tasting one's soul. I feel like that's what I did here with you...it was soft, it was vulnerable, it was beautiful, it was melancholy. I love your words Darun."
Posted by Dreaming in Stanzas on "in.dreams" by SilentStalker
- "that's a rather spellbinding feeling you have going on here ...very well portrayed ...( especially the 'adrenaline' stanza) thanks for sharing it"
Posted by kinkifrog on "in.dreams" by SilentStalker
- "And like midnight-daydreaming I imagine just how it could be... quite a haunting, touching piece here.. I think there are many of us here that can relate.. nice."
Posted by Invisible Girl on "in.dreams" by SilentStalker
- "very nice stalker...sounds like the perfect storm! awesome visuals of you hinding in a bunker riding out the storm. lol...awesome!"
Posted by haunted on "in.dreams" by SilentStalker
- "Oh. my. fucking. gosh. This is why I fell in love with your words so long ago, you capture these graphic moments then display them for me like a piece of art. The two of you together are incredible. The first line that got me was "her raspberry voice" then the part about stapling the tiara to her head and her being the princess....oh lord I'm at a loss.....and you even included a part about a hatchet?? Oh, yes."
Posted by Dreaming in Stanzas on "bleeding.betrayal (siren's sung her last) w/Rain In The Willows" by SilentStalker
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