Comments by All Members
- "Guessing it's not going to happen then - lying beside you in life that is. Darkly grim and despondent and hope somebody gives you a new smile soon, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Lie You Here" by alesana
- ""All alone! Whether you like it or not, alone is something you'll be quite a lot." -Dr. Seuss.... hmm hmm.. thoughtful..
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Posted by sheff on "Character Sketch" by alesana
- "She sounds an overly empathetic lady with no resistance to that, a bit of feistiness to her character maybe. Otherwise a great job."
Posted by Magdalena on "Character Sketch" by alesana
- "She sounds too good to be true. More holier than thou perhaps? The world will eventually break her. They say if you are 25 and not a liberal / save the world type - then you have no heart. They go on to say if you are 50 and still persist in your liberal views - then you have no brain. Hope this helps but I think she needs some character flaw we can all relate to, maybe? Thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Character Sketch" by alesana
- "DA said it best - this was great and strongly said, thanks A. You've come a long ways in the last few months."
Posted by dwells on "For What You Stand" by alesana
- "This is awesome, good job. I really like it when poetry says something important and has such great rhythm as well. It makes it all the more memorable."
Posted by DarkAsh on "For What You Stand" by alesana
- "Don't tell me now that your incisors are starting to elongate (HA)! Can you still see yourself in the mirror? I get the same sensation whe I walk out of a bar on a bright day. Let me know when there's more to this - looks structurally fine to me, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Night Sensation" by alesana
- "thanks! means a lot(: I go to a really hard school so I rarely have time to write but I'll try to get around to it more often. Most of my free time is spent with what my friend calls my "Prince Charming""
Posted by alesana on "Grave Robber" by alesana
- "Excellent job, a remorseful grave robber now a vampire for his troubles! This was several cuts way above average for this website (and others), thankyou for that."
Posted by dwells on "Grave Robber" by alesana
- "alesana this is an awesome fucking write! holy crap, im really loving this. it has everything i love. death, undead , zombie,coffins, cemeterey...... beautiful poem. its flow is great and the story line is perfect! and god, i miss you! im faving this poem!"
Posted by haunted on "Grave Robber" by alesana
- "This is why I love this site...cause of gems like this. thanks for sharing this it was beautiful. "
Posted by Unknown on "Froth of the Sea" by alesana
- "great poem alesana, has a very spiritual, new age feel to it. its nice to see you again, you should post more of your old stuff. this is awesome!"
Posted by haunted on "Maiden of the Stars" by alesana
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