Comments by All Members
- "This was a short and sweet sentiment. Simpler moments usually amount to much more significance. Good write..."
Posted by Spiral Downward on "You" by Starshine
- "wow that was really good. so truthful! you did a great job explain your problem and i see myself in many parts"
Posted by Unknown on "Anxiety" by Starshine
- "an existential angst... that moment of realization, the cause of anxiety... the boredom and repetition, redundancy of life broodingly meaningless. This captures it... the emotional turmoil, the reflecting pain... the emptiness of living and the paradox of not dying... the truth... simmering within. quite the despairing read... thank you."
Posted by The Dybbuk on "Anxiety" by Starshine
- "Some times we need to talk less and listen more - it does wonders for putting things in perspective sometimes, and can serve as a wake up call to what we might perceive as our own, unique "problems". Well done and cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Anxiety" by Starshine
- "I loved this work as a whole, beautiful flow and depiction. "...you are afraid to find the truth...but I am afraid the truth will find me" Wonderful! Thank yoU!"
Posted by Loketha Angel on "Anxiety" by Starshine
- "Immensely enjoyed this ..deserving of many more comments ..look forward to reading more of you. "
Posted by River Lily on "Disorder" by Starshine
- "for a while doctors thought i had bipolar until to no suprise found out they were wrong.........this was a great write loved the flow"
Posted by rosemaiden on "Bipolar " by Starshine
- "I saw the title and I just had to read it, I suffer from bipolar as well, and this is definately something I understand. The last lines are so powerful! great job."
Posted by Phantasmagoria on "Bipolar " by Starshine
- ""I sweat down dread" perhaps? This was kinda' one-sided because I'd guess you can be the most upbeat and carefree person too - when not crashing down ionto valleys and canyons. THanks for sharing this."
Posted by dwells on "Bipolar " by Starshine
- "This poem struck me. But everything seems to be merciless and painful. The world gets darker, and people just blot out the sun some days. Lovely."
Posted by Hands_Around_My_Throat on "Bipolar " by Starshine
- "Marvelous and profoundly expressed and I'll have to re-read to comment effectively, meanwhile thanks for this tooughtful piece, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Disorder" by Starshine
- "Love is only
a lullaby
in a world without mercy---I really like the ending lines. they make the whole poem worthwhile."
Posted by Patches on "Bipolar " by Starshine
- "Ahhhhhhh Music to my ears miss.. Hello there you.. Don't believe we've met.. I'll have to read more.. Welcome to Darkpoetry. "
Posted by Devilish on "The Devil" by Starshine
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