Frozen pieces

By Starshine

It's a long night under the stars
and in my ceiling
there is just fragments of your black soul.

And when the pieces are put together,
I will not remember you at all...

I will not remember although there's something missing.
But I can't remember what... who?

Who are you?

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Copyright 2011 Starshine
Published on Friday, October 21, 2011.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • dwells On Friday, October 21, 2011, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Great idea but the presentation needs some work / developement maybe, thanks.

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