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- "Too many have suffered the fate of taking that involves giving only suffering. Too few find any release, and by the poem I can't tell if the perfect someone is death or if someone who has taught you to love again. I hope for the someone, not the death. You didn't deserve that."
Posted by syzygy on "Thank you for the lost innocence" by terris crimson
- "I did see a slight grammatical error that was overlooked. Not being picky, just pointing it out so you know. Line 2: "weather they be playing cards." (Whether) . . . . . .
I would want to know if I overlooked something, so I could correct it. :) .......
Interesting story! Well Done!
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Posted by Damon Tarloth on "Laying out the cards" by terris crimson
- "This is a very sad piece.. It feels like a punch in the gust, the harshness and cruelty of the story are just horrifying.. You put your raw emotions on the paper without "making up" them and that makes this piece honest and overwhelming.. I hope you are doing better now and please keep on posting... :)"
Posted by Unknown on "THIS OLD GUN...the last bullet" by terris crimson
- "An interesting reading.. Your style is different from all that I have read here and I like it.. Your thoughts are deep and very well put on the paper.. :)"
Posted by Unknown on "tales from the damned" by terris crimson
- "This reminds me of a book series I read where for one hour every night at midnight certain people have the hour to themselves. "I must suffer each day, awaiting until nightfall" Yea I know this. The energy is sucked out of me during the day and I can barely function, but when nightfall comes I am so alive. Great write!"
Posted by Unknown on "Waiting for nightfall" by terris crimson
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