Comments by All Members
- ""My body is the sound of a mild humming,
He is a song sung softly and fluidly.
He instills his lyrics into my body--
My lips scream his song and I collapse." - romantic use of imagery! Excellent work! Can't believe this slipped below the radar. Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Collapse" by Quietus
- "I like to call it knocking the cobwebs out ... we all go through it. I think this is great. I was on hiatus fora while myself and have recently returned so I totally know how you feel. Keep up the great work ."
Posted by Unknown on "Collapse" by Quietus
- "The attribution was obviously the catalyst to this piece Q, so good to see you all growed-up now and marvelous job in the proclamation, cheers lady!"
Posted by dwells on "Love, Sex, & Punk Rock" by Quietus
- "Wow, very good. I can relate to it, and even the way you wrote it, was like you were saying goodbye to a friend, and I found myself getting a little sad. Well done, better than a lot Ive seen.
Leopard."
Posted by Unknown on "Goodbye, My Heart" by Quietus
- "Drowning seems like a peaceful way to die for me. Especially when you consider the many other, brutal ways to die. Thank you for reading! :)"
Posted by Quietus on "How It Feels to Drown." by Quietus
- "The ocean scares me somewhat, since it's really big, but I do love the feeling of being under water almost too long and coming back to surface dizzy :) A bad habit of mine while swimming, haha! "
Posted by Quietus on "How It Feels to Drown." by Quietus
- "Hey, thanks! :) I tried, considering it was 4 in the morning when I had a sudden urge to write about drowning. Didn't even remember I wrote it until now! "
Posted by Quietus on "How It Feels to Drown." by Quietus
- "The only thing that really terrifies me is the Ocean. It's a work like this that gives some insight as to why... Gah! I hate water! Great poem, makes me want to stay on dry land! "
Posted by DarkAsh on "How It Feels to Drown." by Quietus
- "Hi Q - you left out the part about the aching and uncontrollable spasms when the water hits your lungs. This was very original and thanks for the view. "
Posted by dwells on "How It Feels to Drown." by Quietus
- "that did indeed come to mind...'sleeping beauty'that is. morbid is right. welcome to dp."
Posted by natalie on "Morbid Beauty " by Quietus
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