Collapse

By Quietus





I am a wounded gazelle fighting for life,
He is a hungry lion stalking his prey.
He attacks me so gently--
I give up my fight and I collapse.

 


He is the wind guiding me ever so gently,
I am a leaf touched by the calmness of his movement.
Together we glide in a state of euphoria--
All of my nerves gather as one and I collapse.

 


My body is the sound of a mild humming,
He is a song sung softly and fluidly.
He instills his lyrics into my body--
My lips scream his song and I collapse.

 


He is the warmth of a summer's day,
I am the cold mist of morning.
Together, we collide in the sky--
A storm erupts and I collapse.

 


I want to crawl into his skin.
I want to disappear into the softness of white sheets.
I want to be unraveled in ways that only he can unravel me.
I love him and the storm that we create.


 

I collapse...



 

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Copyright 2015 Quietus
Published on Wednesday, June 10, 2015.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Wow. I finally got an actual membership so I can post now. It's been WAY too long. First post was '11 and now it's '15. Time flies. Sorry if I've lost my touch, hahaha. I'm rusty. Also, sorry it's so cheesy. --Quietus
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  • sadistic intent hex On Tuesday, August 20, 2019, sadistic intent hex (206)By person wrote:

    your word play put me in the moment, he is a hungry lion stalking his prey and attacks me so gently. like that always a pleasure.

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Friday, April 29, 2016, TropicalSnowstorm (1580)By person wrote:

    "My body is the sound of a mild humming, He is a song sung softly and fluidly. He instills his lyrics into my body-- My lips scream his song and I collapse." - romantic use of imagery! Excellent work! Can't believe this slipped below the radar. Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • A former member wrote: I like to call it knocking the cobwebs out ... we all go through it. I think this is great. I was on hiatus fora while myself and have recently returned so I totally know how you feel. Keep up the great work . Scholar

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